| "The Sands of Time" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Title: YamiYukiYore
Reviewed By: YamiYukiYore [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I just wanted to know, do you know what the other fic is called the one that Yami and Sakura have to babysit Yugi when he doesnt remember his real parents? I forgot that one. Can you help? Um, write back if you know, or if you dont understand my message.
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Jaded_Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon! I love what uve rote so far so keep up the good work..k?!....plz update soon!. :)
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Title: 'sup?
Reviewed By: Jaded_Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 03:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon! I love what uve rote so far so keep up the good work..k?!....plz update soon!. :)
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 17:26 CST
Comment/Review:
good but if the famous theif turned up in your palace id try to arrest him or what ever. not the point greatr story can't wait for a update!
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Howdy! It was pretty good. Though, what's up with Greece? Could you maybe put in more Ryou and Bakura, or something? Well, keep up the good work. Upload the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 19:39 CST
Comment/Review:
this is good! poor grumpy yami poor grumpier Seto. Are joey and *cough * anzu going to show up? well scratch anzu or she can be a meaningless servent in the past. MwHaHahA hm anyway keep it coming!
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Title: keep it up!
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 15:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep it up! It\'s going great! Update soon
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 19:22 CST
Comment/Review:
pweh Sacura's okay! *hugs self* anyway great story its really interesting! They can get a dragon to fly them to Greece. don't forget the pharaohs lil bro! can't wait for your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 16:20 CST
Comment/Review:
yay! evil magnus! wait so if Yami didn't save Secura then what happens? AHHH *vein starts throbbing on head* ahhhh!
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Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 09:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Does ne1 want me 2 change back to script format?
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Title: Princess Rayne
Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 17:43 CST
Comment/Review:
The reason the summary seems like it doesn't fit the story is because I haven't started the adventure yet. In a few more chapters my summary is gonna make sense. Sorry for all the confusion and stuff.
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Reviewed By: Princess Rayne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! Please hurry and put the next chapter up A.S.A.P! I think you should change the summary for it though, because 'R&R or I'll never continue' sounds (not criticizing you, of course) bitchy. Don't mind the ratings, these are like the highest I give out.
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story. It was confusing switching script but o well! Any way like i said i like your story what happenes to Jou and his sister? Is she reliving her dream? Or are all the other people going to get rolls in this! Make ANzu get turned down. (i dont' lke anzu, you can find that out from my storys ^_-)
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! It's pwetty good so far! Though, it was kind of strange when you switched the writing. The paragraphs were also in clumps, but it was still good. Keep up the good work. Oh, by the way, what is Yugi doing in Ancient Egypt? I got to know! Upload the next chapter soon!
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Title: It's good.
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I couldn't write a review earlier, but the computer that we have has a virus. Anyway, your fan fiction is good. It needs more of a plot though. I know, coming from me. Well, maybe you can make a person, that killed Yami's father in the past, come back, and want the item Sakura has. Maybe, someone close to Sakura and Yami betray them to have this almighty item. . . Okay, I'm getting a little out of hand. . . Well, it's really good. Upload the next chapter soon!
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