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| "Not Applicable" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Jess Scefing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mm... I really like this, ya know? The characterization was wonderful, and I could pretty much see this playing out visually. And I also like how you handled telling of Raven's past, leaving it to the imagination of some and the comic book knowledge of others. Oh, and poor Raven, being forced into a hug! There are few things more horrible, but I feel that she probably likes them even less than I do. ^^ Another great ficclet, and between this and the one of yours I just read I'm thinking I'll have to look up a bit more by you...
| Reviewed By: dam't I can't find a name On: November 30, 2003 22:13 CST
Comment/Review:
didn't Raven tell starfire her past when they swiched bodies in that one episode. Of course they cut away after she said where she was born.
| Reviewed By: victim On: November 25, 2003 08:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I tend not to give perfect ratings, as ya can see, but ya did come pretty close. I must say this was a truly well-done fic and that there is something seriously messed up with the rations system. It should be so that you HAVE to review every fic you view, no matter what. That'd be nice. I think you did a nice job of showing Raven without shoving Raven, pushing her into anything that wasn't here. It didn't take too much imagination to see this happening. And you left enough blanks for the readers to play with. Very nicely done. I shall give a short applause. This work didn't suck. Which is a rather astonishing thing to note actually, comparing to all current works on this and other large fiction sites. Ah... Is all I suppose. Lisboa Miraflores [tru_sama@yahoo.com]
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