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| "Slayers: Mirror" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: None
Reviewed By: Samual Tong On: July 06, 2004 05:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far for the reading that maybe Lina and Naga have a crush on each other, but what about someother gangs and the real Naga have what affect on it? I'll stay toon of this story so keep on going
| Reviewed By: Jared [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 08:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Would have liked to put this at the pic-a-fic thread, but didn't quite see the need to. Hope you don't mind. I pretty much liked your style, so I gave you a seven. It was easy to read, and rather close to the style in which the anime is presented. I'm not sure if this is your natural style, or if this was something you adopted to suit the series. Either way, it worked pretty well for this fic. Humourous, without being too in your face. Nice job. :) However, some parts could be improved upon. For example, your description earlier on (the part with Lina's face being on the banner) was a little unclear. I wasn't quite sure why she'd be displeased, or what was going on. Course, this might be because I only watched the series, so I'm pretty clueless about the goings-on here. I felt that your story was rather original, and hence the eight. Perhaps these things have been set in the OAV or the movies. I'm not sure, but I feel that it has the makings of a good plot, what with the twin idea, and the introduction of new characters like Alex (I'm assuming that they're your creations). Because the story is still moving along at a reasonable pace so far, I found it pretty enjoyable to read. Overall, I felt that the story is rather interesting, and I'd love to read some more. Nice work. :) Just wondering, though, you had Lina say Naga resembled Amelia because she said "Oh, dear" at one stage. This I didn't quite get. This doesn't strike me as being a pet-phrase of Amelia's. Course, it's been ages since I last watched the series, so my facts are a little rusty. ^_^;;
| Reviewed By: Adyen (Not logged in) On: November 06, 2003 11:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh. I'm interested to see where this leads to. Haven't not actually seen the series (something I'm trying to fix), I only know from what I picked up from fanfics and reviews. However, even that is enough to tell me that this is going to be an interesting piece of writing.
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