| "Shadow In Her Midst" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wut will happen when kikyo wakes up? if she wakes up... will she steal inuyasha away from kagome WHEN they get together?!?? (notice i said when not if) lol, srry if i'm being a bitforceful...hehe....yeah.... *change of mood* great chapter! write more soon!
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Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 15:58 CST
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oh my god you have to update like now!!!!! i really want to know what happens next!! do kagome and Inu yasha get together?! I REALLY REALLY HOPE SO!!!! and will kikyo ever wake up???? i must know!!!!! update soon!!!!no.... update NOW!!!!! arianna
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Reviewed By: Kym On: December 14, 2003 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! You updated!! ~*does the happy dance*~ Yea, I love those feelings too. Do you have any recomendations?I can't find any!! :( So sad This may sound stupid, but Kagome in this story reminds me or......well, me.
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Title: WooHoo
Reviewed By: LottaLuvGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 19:02 CST
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*sigh...* My computers down,but the good news is that my mom is putting my computer in another part of our house so i can have my computer time.T_T...I love my mommy....(espically when i bug her so much she just can't refuse me.lol.I'm sooo smart!)Anyways,your story is WAY better than mine.I'm not kidding either.I love your fic.It's so...unique,and I also like the way you don't make kag and inu hop into a relationship right away.That's just not how life goes. >:/
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Title: BusinessMija@aol.com
Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 00:51 CST
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ooh another great chapter..what can I say about this chap and the story in general other than it pulls at your heart strings..two lonely hurting kids inside find each other and dont like one another, but hopefully will later on, but for now they are both suffering inside yet playing at being happy, being just fine..so many kids now a days do the same thing, they hide the things that hurt them inside so no one will feel pity or sypathy for them, they just want to be normal, have normal feelings, friends, to be accepted, yet inside they feel like they cant be themselves unless they are what everyone else wants them to be..ya I was like Kagome and Inu in this fic, always smiling and always being the listener, the peacemaker and the friend everyone could lean on, I was the happy free spirit that made others feel happy themselves when things in thier lives were not going so well, yet inside I wasnt always so happy or bright, inside I cried and wished just once someone would listen to me..they would of if I had told them I know but at the time I thought if i wanted friends I had to be the perfect friend, and to keep them I had to continue it and not let on that things were not always right..lol..I know much better now..finally told some dear friends of my past and pains and ya know?? they were there for me like I had always been for them..ok ok giving ya my history, so will stop anyhow I guess I love this fic because it really shows alot of emotions and yet has the basis for a happily ever after if they just let go and be themselves..wow..ok I wont babble no more except to say i love this fic and I cant wait for more updates soo like ummm update soon k?? lol ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 *cant sign in* On: December 03, 2003 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.....made me cry! Sooo sad. I feel for you Kagome...man...I think Yash WAS too mean! Ooh....yay! Sesshy is coming in soon, demo, im glad that he wont have a big part cuz he seems like hes mean in this ficcie, but thats ku, cuz heck, he always is ne? Heh...but, yes, i am trying hard to learn japanese, but only know a very few basic things...Thats col how you learned a lil jap. this is how is tarted off too! And i like when they have lil jap dictionaries on the end and i also hate when they have lil ans in the middle! it does riun the moment ne? hmm..well, this is good. demo i think Kagome is better than Kikyo, especially since she can hold it all in and stuff. And i like how you showed the birthday party and everything! ITs sooo wonderful! *sniff* this is a really lovely fic my dear. Watashi (I, mostly females use it) love it! i hope ya update soon, but please take your time. -Lani
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: December 03, 2003 18:13 CST
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how sad...i really want Inuyasha 2 kno about her being sad!!! she really needs 2 let all that sorrow off her chest! ur a really good writer! go on!
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Reviewed By: Kym On: November 29, 2003 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! Its really good! One of my all time favorites and believe me, have read a lot of fanfics and this one must be in the top 3!! Keep writing and keep up the good work!!
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Title: Happy
Reviewed By: LottaLuvGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 20:41 CST
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I'm very happy to say that I still like this fic.It's the best ever,better than my new one...erm...Happily Gone.I dunno about that one,cause it's kinda freaky deaky even for me.Lol,but I still think yours is better than mine,since i don't get much comments on any of mine anyways....anyways,Keep updating! :)
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Title: Finally!
Reviewed By: LottaLuvGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 02:36 CST
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Finally......not a really really mushy happy fic for once.I lust love this fic so much :).Continue to write and ipdate please ^______^
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Title: BusinessMija@aol.com
Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 22:47 CST
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ooh this is a good story very sad but very unique I love it alot and cant wait till you update love this fic..:-) huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!!!! KAWAII!!! aww....hun this is SOOOO sweet! and sad! T-T poor Kagome, but i for some STRANGE reason, LOVE angst! lol-i can't wait for Sesshy-sama to be in here! Hn...do ya take Japanese? I am studying it by myself! hehe-oh! And domo arigato gozaimasu for telling me what Mou meant! GOD*no offens*! I have been wondering for AGES about that! and was the Peacemaker girl the other series person? i dont know what series it is forom though...well, this is really good hun! i LOVE that you put Naraku and Kagura together with Sango, Hojo, and Kagome as childhood fwens! good job hun! this is a wonderful story so far, and i REALLY hope you update soooon!-Lani
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I still think that you could make the chapters a bit more lengthy but really it's fine I'm just a very picky person :P . It's sorta cute how you put Naraku and Kagura as Kagomes' childhood friends.(even though I can't picture that in the actual series. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kym On: November 22, 2003 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is a really good story. I havent seen (or read) one like it!! In my opinion, very original!! PLz keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan (to lazy to login) On: November 19, 2003 14:43 CST
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Poor Kagome ç_ç That's so sad.... PLease write Inu/Kag fluff! Update a.s.a.p., ok? ^_~
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