| "Shadow In Her Midst" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 11:22 CST
Comment/Review:
oooooouuu good that's really good but UPDATE!!!!!!! here's a little thing i have to say: update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update! yup that about covers it! =) is this gonna be a inu/kag fic? please make it an inu/kag fic!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 11:22 CST
Comment/Review:
oooooouuu good that's really good but UPDATE!!!!!!! here's a little thing i have to say: update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update! yup that about covers it! =)
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Reviewed By: Mizu no Megami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a sad story!!! YAY!!!!!!oh yeah, care to include Sess in there somewhere? lol. Im not a sess/kag fan for nothing! But this is a really good start, tell me if u need any ideas!
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry typo. Don't not Don'y. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, The story is good so far. Don'y rush yourself into updating to quick because if you don't already have the story written down you lose alot of good ideas. I'm not saying do not update I'm just saying take your time. K? I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
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