| "Memories Last Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Kagome-chan2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dont give up on the story because it is great so far!!! Rewrite the chappies and add some more detail!!! also, you can switch back and forth through EVERYONE"S point of view, to make it more interesting!!! update soon please!!!
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Title: hmmm...
Reviewed By: shedvl929(nli) On: December 12, 2003 11:13 CST
Comment/Review:
is this supposed to be a darkfic??? it's an okay fic, but i cant tell weither it's supposed to be a darkfic, an action fic or wut. o well... update soon
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Reviewed By: ironreverss On: December 12, 2003 11:11 CST
Comment/Review:
This fic is very interesting. i'm curious to see what happens next. dont worry about people not reviewing, more people then not are just too lazy to review. there is one thing though... STOP with the faces!!! :-P ANYWAYS update soon
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Title: ....
Reviewed By: a fan On: November 11, 2003 16:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an interesting story, I'm eager to see what happens next. WRITE MORE NOW!!! IF YOU DONT I'LL COME MAKE YOU! Thank you for your time. Great story! write more!
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Title: how sad...
Reviewed By: Jenadoggy On: November 09, 2003 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is so cool! Also, sad...and interestingly written. Keep up the good work! ^^
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