| "Drive" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Kagome_the_Yorkie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 01:11 CDT
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GOOD HONK, WOMAN! WHAT were you THINKING?!! I mean honestly, could you have written something more depressing? Could you have dreamed up a worse ending, seriously? And the excessive bloodlust was sure a nice touch. Really loved that, slight slash fan that I am, you had to overdo it to such an extent. I mean, honestly. And the Minions--what were Minions of Hell doing in the same room with a Demon? Especially one that was trying to work? And another thing! The ending was my least favorite part. It made me cry and I've never even seem Gundam! That did not have to happen! You could have written a happy ending, one with major hurt/comfort bishie potential! Why, oh why did you have to give us that "striking" image (oh, it "stays in the mind", alright) at the end? This is one of the most well-written peices of senseless, stomach-wrenching gore I've ever seen--why are you putting energy into this? *Sighs* Okay. Thank you for letting me criticize you, and please keep writing...just, different material.
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Title: Great story!
Reviewed By: WickedGame [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 04:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was a well written example of horror in anime fanfiction. Even though I love GW, and Duo in particular, I enjoyed every minute of this fic. The yaoi was handled well.
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Reviewed By: ThePD [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awesome story, i hate gundum and scary things so it only gets a 7 for enjoyment... However, it is the only story like this i have seen (10) and the style and spelling were great... i think i found 1-2 miss spells... Congratulations.
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Title: Scary as hell
Reviewed By: MGSFREEK101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 16:51 CST
Comment/Review:
seriously liked it. good job
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sniff... they all died. WAAAA!!! It was a great story!! hmmm scary storys seem to be rare in this place. MORE scary stuff please !! ::a general request:: (^_^) Thank you so much for sharing and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Gabbie On: November 16, 2003 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really don't get it. But it was excellent. Don't mind me I am usually slow at these things. Well I loved it anyway and I hope to be seeing more of you soon. It was a great job done. Congrats!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 11:37 CST
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Cool story :) blood up to the knees, but well done, a good example of the horror genre. The ending in particular was striking, the final image (of the pilots, you know the one I mean, don't want to spoil the ending for someone reading the review first) stays in mind.
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