| "Firebird" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Response to the reviews
Reviewed By: Himura Karou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 00:22 CST
Comment/Review:
To Iris_Sun: Thanks for the praise...it means a lot to me. To who knows:Yes, i did write this story. You might have see it on Fanfiction.Net, where I am so fondly known as "Vera-Sama" If you saw it anyevere else, then someone's been plagerizing my work. To Peril879: *gives cookie* you were half right. I was actually aiming for the fact that hotori looks like tamahome (as a drunk Tasuki later points out) bust she does also resemble Miaka...so sure, a cookie for you. To Thao_Lorakin: you said: "at the end its hotori's parents... and i like it so far, but weres tamahome???" I'm not sure i get what you mean. Hotori's parents are Miaka and Tamahome...as for whatever happend to the kids...well, it's explained better in the sequel I'm working on. Basically, they keep them and raise them as their own. And for your tip, thanks. I'm more then likely going to strt a massive edit/rewrite on this fic once I get a break from school. I'll keep your suggestion in mind then. To All: I must really suggest you get an account on FF.net and follow my work (including this story) there because, honestly, i forget to update here on MM.Org. It's nothing personal...I just have a horrid memory. That's why it took so long for me to reply to the reviews.
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Title: tip
Reviewed By: Thao_Lorakin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey.. i just wanted to say i love the story. here's an idea though. u dont have 2 use it just wanted to voice it out loud.. well so to speak. When usure says that they will soon have an Heir to the throne an Hotohori slitly pales. mayb u could have like a like dialog b tween the to when the group walks away or something. cause it only seems like u brush the subject then huryy on ward wit the story. just a thought.
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Title: children
Reviewed By: Thao_Lorakin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 20:25 CST
Comment/Review:
wat ever happened 2 the children that they found in the village???? i mean at the end of the story
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Reviewed By: Thao_Lorakin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 15:46 CST
Comment/Review:
at the end its hotori's parents,,, and i like it so far, but weres tamahome???
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Reviewed By: Peril879 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hotori reminds Nuriko of Miaka! Yay! I get a cookie!
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Title: hmm...
Reviewed By: who knows On: March 18, 2004 22:24 CST
Comment/Review:
I think I saw this fanfic somewhere.. Did you write this story or not?
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Title: I didn't mean to!
Reviewed By: Iris_Sun [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wah!!! *got so caught up in reading that she let her mouth hang open, thus letting the stinky air from somewhere drift in* I almost threw up! *cries* But this is a GREAT story! Well, of course it is! Ish by you~! ^o^ I lurff FY.
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