| "Empty Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Sapadu
Reviewed By: Sapadu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 09:04 CST
Comment/Review:
So cute... Poor Ken-chan. I knew he was that kind of person. You got this whole thing down perfectly.
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Title: GOD DAMN IT SOMEONE TELL ME WHAT THAT MEANS
Reviewed By: Cor Cor On: November 29, 2003 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved i poor ken. davis was so sweet and tk fucking sucks i never did like him.
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Title: because im a sick sick girl/guy THING
Reviewed By: suke [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My review of DOOM WAHHH! I love it. everyone should die this way. This is my commandment. Im just revving you to tell you that the story is TEH cool and that you should write more clichés because you actually write them well. and I was going to go and babble about how uber takuya's sternum-crushy is but first I must scream and rant over FUCKTARD who revved your Desperations story.. I will go and assault him now. With a gun. Because that just makes it really wrong and im like that But yes. I love how kouji and takuya are all sweet on each other. Its the uber cute. But yes I wanted to go on and on about takuya death monster… but I suck at reviewing. And I m not scary at all am?… but yes onwards! I absolutely adore all the blood gurgling and the coughing and blood and the gore and STERNUM CRUSHY! That was fucking genius You killed him real good. Though it did kind of piss me off that kouji didn't go all psycho! boyfriend and stab the takuya-murdering-twin right between the eyes. Because come on. That would be cool. But I really liked the Upset! Kouji crying over Takuya's sternum-crushed form. And how he was wailing, because I had mental images of the neighbours going, "oh its that whore's dreadful son again. I bet he's gone and burnt himself on the toaster!" (don't ask about the toaster) And, and !! I forgot to mention how much I absolutely fucking adored how you worded 'as the blood slipped past his lips' I love that sentence. the end And yes. I must go and drool over this story again, and write my own Whore!Daisuke, Bitter!Bastard!Ken story. So yes Good bye for now. Write as much as humanely possible and then write MORE! Lots of love and christmas trees Suke oh yeah.. you like my account. arent i not cool? this is for my scik stories.. if i ever get any. HUH! i own love and donuts tanni
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