| "'Til You Return to Me" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Title: terri
Reviewed By: Terrie On: October 30, 2004 04:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont write too many reviews but after reading your note I decided to give you my opinion about your story before revisions are made. Your story is one of the best well written Inuyasha fics I have read in the past year. I was disappointed to see your haven't been updating the story. Your story doesn't suck and neither do you suck as a writer. Your story is very well organized and unlike many fan fics, you have always managed to keep your story true to its theme. Your story is VERY creative and original. Your writing technique always seems to draw the reader into the scene. I can actually feel the emotions that your characters are expressing. I find your character and scenery descriptions very realistic and interesting. Also, I enjoy the mixture of humor and seriousness you have achieved with your story. It is good that you critic your writing but please don't be so harsh on yourself. This IS a good story. I have been writing for many years and enjoy reading good stories. Please update soon. Terri
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: October 19, 2004 15:46 CDT
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fic never sucked. But you can go ahead and reread it.... I have no say in the matter afterall.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 01:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok.
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Reviewed By: scarletraven1001* On: October 14, 2004 19:04 CDT
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the story didn 't suck... it's one of my faves! but anyway, it's your decision. i will be patiently waiting like a stone for the next chapters to be rewritten. ^_^ good luck!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 12, 2004 17:59 CDT
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Ok. Good luck with thr rewrite, look forwards to (re-?)reading it when you start posting the new chapters. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: cHaOs3035 On: October 12, 2004 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story before but if you feel this is necessary then please go right ahead. I know what it's like to look back on your story and finding a lot of issues with it, i know because i have taken my story down several times and I highly support your decision to redo the story. Either way I know I'll love it. Always, Lady
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Reviewed By: Lady_iNs On: October 12, 2004 14:35 CDT
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Title: Sad
Reviewed By: animefan8581 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 01:25 CDT
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I just finished reading your fic and I got to say it is great. But I am quite sadden that you haven't updated yet. Please update soon ^-^
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Title: same
Reviewed By: terr On: August 05, 2004 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly like this story and have been waiting for your update since jul 1st. I don't know why you are revising the already posted chapters because the story is wonderful as it is. But it would be nice that you would continue with the story and post the next chapter instead of rewriting what is already posted. thank you
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 11:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
kidding bout inu busting through walls. but you should let that happen somewhere in the story. i like when that happens...hehehe
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep going. your story is so good and intersting. i like how inuyasha bust through the wall. wow. that was funny. he really kicked those guys butts. please keep going. i really enjoy this fic.
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Title: i soo LOVED IT!!!!
Reviewed By: hglover2 On: July 19, 2004 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. i loved the awsome story. u have very nice long chapters. i read ur story so far in 1 day.(took me a long time though). oh pleaze update soon. and i hope everything goes well in college. oh and the way kag and inu love eachother is soo sweet. i hope kag says yes if he proposes again!!! well plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: ruinmew On: July 03, 2004 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this should be in graphic novel form good job ^_^
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Title: Got Angst?
Reviewed By: MsCongeniality [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 20:40 CDT
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Great chapter Squeaky :)
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: July 01, 2004 18:08 CDT
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Beautiful chapter as always. Loved the way that the plot is developing, liked the haiku as well. Like I keep saying son't worry about the delays, it happens. Life doesn't get put on hold because people are wating for an update. Hope the Japanese goes well, personally I hope to get a chance to learn it one day, or at least the spoken word. I don't think I could manage the written as well ^_^; Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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