| "The Best Defense" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: stix On: July 27, 2005 16:58 CDT
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i loved this story. it was great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: j On: November 29, 2004 18:09 CST
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hurry up and write more you haven't writting in soo long get off you ass and write more
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Reviewed By: k On: November 12, 2004 18:39 CST
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hey hurry up and write more just dont leave me hanging man its good stuff keep going
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Reviewed By: Foxflame..not signed in On: September 16, 2004 22:19 CDT
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it was a nice chappie...umm one thin i noticed wus the ending thing about the ppl in each house teams..cho isnt in hufflepuff, shes in ravenclaw...o0oh well...updatee soon!!!-fox
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Crazy Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 20:32 CDT
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I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I LOVE HP YU YU CROSSOVERS!!!! THIS STORY IS GREAT!!!! Keep writing it!!!
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: Chisuto On: September 13, 2004 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! I was reading your story, and I liked it. I think that Neville should be another person on the team, because he can't do wand magic, so maybe he can do wandless magic. =D Update soon! ~Chisuto
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 13, 2004 16:55 CDT
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Cho's in Ravenclaw isn't she? Ernie could be in the Hufflepuff team. Ginny in Gryffindor and for Slytherin.... Pansy.
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Reviewed By: Immortal Evil Fanfic Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 17:33 CDT
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Maybe it should be Ron, Hermione or Harry... I dunno... or Hagrid... Hagrid goes into the forest... how would he react to seeing one of his students with a strange kitsune? oh, before I forget... OHMYGOD I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Foxflame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 19:33 CDT
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remember my previously stated anger....well here it is!!!! its been sooooo long since your last update, and its wierd cuz i usually forget stries, even wen they r updated daily i loose my place...buh i memba yurs n wish it wus updated!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Crazy Clown Chick On: June 03, 2004 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think you should have Kuronue in the fic. He's dead, remember? And, it'd be much more interestin if it was someone like Malfoy or Voldemort. Someone that could blow their cover. And, it would be really cool if Kurama and Hiei get caught makin out or somethin by Heremoine or Ron or Harry.
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 16:30 CDT
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*shrugs* it can be Kuroune, but as you said there may be too many characters there already. As for the triwizard cup *evil grin* why not, it'll be more suspenseful because they'll have a harder time to control their ablities.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Death [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 11:15 CDT
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*sighs* Haaaaaaaahhh..... Youko... And Hiei.... Oh... *snsps to attention* Who's Suzuki? I dont seem to recall him.... Hehe....oops.
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Reviewed By: Blood Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 22:08 CST
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I think Kuronue would be an awsome idea! I love this story.....wait I like all your stories that I have read! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: stormy1 On: January 26, 2004 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good. Please keep it going!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont think it should be Kuronue. I think it should be one of the demons hanging with voldemort you talked about earlier. I love Kuronue but you do have a lot of characters already. Also, i think you should have something like the tournament but different at the same time. Interesting idea with the Draco/Harry thing, I had never thought of it that way. You should have Draco keep trying to stop Kurama from doing anything: you know, threats and bribes and stuff. Great story by the way. I love it so far and i hope you continue it really soon.
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