| "My Kitsune" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: stix On: July 31, 2005 17:54 CDT
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i loved this story. it was great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 08:15 CDT
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Great story, i have been wanting to read it for a long time and now that school is out im so happy that i got the opportunity to do so...well, onto the next in the series
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Reviewed By: TGB On: February 09, 2005 17:03 CST
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Inari is a goddess.
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Title: HieiLover#?
Reviewed By: melody [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 19:18 CDT
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Wow, this was even better than I remembered!!! Third time through and enjoying it as af it were the first... ^__~ You rock! Now then, stop reading this and go work on updating this awesome series!!! Ja ne!!!
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Reviewed By: HieiLover#? [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! That was sooooooo GOOD! Amazing, spectacular, terrific, woderful...(30 minutes later)...and just plain great! I love the way you have set up Kurama's and Hiei's relationship, and the hint of Kurama/Yusuke in there added a lot! *hentai grin* The way you switch POV's really adds alot to the story by letting us get to know the characters more deeply. (And congrats -- you hava an excellent grasp on Kurama's and Hiei's personalities; there are still in character no matter what you throw them into!) The only problem was a bit of spelling and grammer, but that is easily forgiven! Keep up the good work, and please please pleeeeeeease write more soon!!! I have to know what happens!!!!!
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Title: Homecoming
Reviewed By: Lady_Readwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A few grammar/spelling mistakes that hindered the reading. Not enough to distract me from reading completely, but enough to stick out in my mind for rememberance. When you get the chance to sit down and reread this story, remember to be open to revisions as well. Generally, I like this story. It's off-beat from what I'm used to reading. I wasn't sure if I would like it when I began, but I find I'm somewhat anxious to get on to reading the next part. I was a little confused with the back-and-forth point of view switching, especially for Kurama, until I realized you're playing in his different personalities. Neat idea. Heie as an sexual innocent... now there's something I don't read every day. ^.^ It shall be fun to see how Kurama decides to initiate our firefly. I enjoyed the interactions amongst the friends, and I hope the gang will have a reason to show face again sometime soon within the following parts. The sences seemed natural and unforced. I'm still a little confused about who the hunter was that was chasing Kurama in the Prologue, what exactly Kurama's running from, what he's running to, and what this treasure is he wished to experience. Hopefully these questions and more will be answered shortly. Good work.
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 00:19 CST
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Just to let you know, kitsune power is based on the number of tails they possess. Kurama has five tails at the time of the series, not four. And if he is now an upper S class, I would place him at seven. The maximum a kitsune can have is nine, but a nine-tail is so rare and so incredibly powerful that it is unlikely Kurama would have achieved that. At nine he could probably overpower practically anyone in the series.
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 14:15 CST
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Great story! Grammar isn't that great though, it neds editting. Pretty angsty overall, I love it. btw, Inari is a God. the Goddess is referred to as the Lady, though she has yet to be used in any fanfic I've read.
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 08:58 CST
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I just love this story!! I just am going to go and read your new one right now!!! Keep it up you are doing a great job!!
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 21:46 CST
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Such a great story so far!! Update soon please!! I beg you!!
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 21:46 CST
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Such a great story so far!! Update soon please!! I beg you!!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Ifurita [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is a great story. it's also a very original plot line. I love the way you write it. It brings you in and draws you to it. It raises questions that aren't answered. Very cool. I sound so old... but anywayz, really good job! I can't wait to read more. This is on my favs list. Update when possible!
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