| "The Last Time" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: ShadowZero000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 16:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay the story was overall okay. I liked the originality. I felt that it was too fast however and there wasn't much detail. Also what's up with Jimmy dying? But don't worry the story was pretty good.
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Reviewed By: Chiffani-chan On: May 06, 2005 09:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
You should use more details, and tell more about what happened, stay more in character, and DON'T KILL OFF SHINICHI! Overall, it wasn't that bad, it was nice, just not my style, but hey keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Kayzie Kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hello! I like this story! It's really good! nobody's read mine yet...PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! I love this story. hey, can you give me a list of the detective conan characters in english and tell me their japanese names? I'm kinda lost, but I figured some people out. THANKS IF YA DO! just find my email address in my profile. ~Kayzie
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Reviewed By: twin blades On: April 05, 2004 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was pretty good but don't exactly like the idea Kudo dying, But then again it is the plot of the story.Keep it up.
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Title: The Last Time
Reviewed By: Starfruit_22 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's very very very very very very very sad that kudo shinchi died on his wedding day. . . . T_T T-T and this guy is shinchi's reincarnate?!?!then what about Heji's reincarnate too?!? ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ TELL ME~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~! MORE~MORE~MORE~MORE~MORE~MORE~MORE~MORE~~~~~!
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