| "Vampire God" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: grammar
Reviewed By: KaibaXTristan4Ever On: November 29, 2004 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
please.. i dont mean to be an ass hole, but PLEASE work on your grammar.. it will help you as well as the rest of us.. its a bit hard to read. the stories are very good though.. i liked them alot! thanks!
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Reviewed By: Peggi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nyeh, i don't give 10s so you'll have to deal with nines but this is a really great fic. interesting concepts, and the lemon scene was...er...interesting to say the least! do continue!
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Reviewed By: Vampire Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it keep up the good work!
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Title: Xpyne
Reviewed By: Solitaire and Xpyne [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 08:12 CST
Comment/Review:
hi this is xpyne, of solitaire and xpyne, the authoress of Firemoth. i read your reviews, and i figure the least i can do for a loyal fan is check out her story like she asked me to. ^__^ i can't judge much by the 1st chapter cuz you havent written much yet, but so far it's not bad. i would suggest working on some of the grammar and punctuation so that your story will flow better. try to use some more descriptions, of like actions and people and stuff. take the scene you're imagining in your head and just describe it so yout readers can get the whole picture. hehe, enough of the semantics tho. eww pegsy is a pedophile, about to seduce/rape poor yugi, how sad. lol. hmm, im morbidly fascinated however. i want to read peg x yuug, even though the thought grosses me out. and just so you know, i totally made up the whole Tracker thing. it was my own invention/idea whatever, so, uh, no one who hasn't read my story will know what you're talking about. good luck with your story and update when you can. mediaminer is stupid and wouldnt let me log in for a few weeks, so ive just posted chapter 4 of Firemoth, but 5 and 6 are done and will be coming soon. up to chapter five is posted on fanfiction.net. ch 6 is brand new just finished it last night, teehee.
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Title: Dark Angel 101
Reviewed By: Dark Angel 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really dont like the Pegasus and Yugi thing very disturbing anyway i would like it if u could update ASAP even though it is disturbing it sounds like a good story... ^_^ *_- 0_o
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Reviewed By: TechnicalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 03:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, please update.
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Title: autumn(peg)
Reviewed By: vampire lips [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 09:31 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm bored bored bored bored bored bored bored bored!!!! will some one please write a rivew?!?!?!?!?! um...please?
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Title: autumn(peg)
Reviewed By: vampire lips [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 09:30 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm bored boed bored bored bored bored bored bored!!!! will some one please write a rivew?!?!?!?!?! um...please?
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