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Reviewed By: keistje [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just recently gotten into reading Kag/Sess fanfiction, and still prefer to read of them in circumstances different from the show. I have to say, yours is one of the best I have ever read. You have a definite talent for writing, and your flair for descriptions allows the reader to play your scenes in their mind as if watching a movie. You seem to have really grasped the nuiances behind the characters personalities and have used that while placing them in this unusual situation. I am not a music major, but I played the clarinet for 7 years, so I understand the love of great music that flows behind this story. I greatly look forward to following your story to its end. I would love to know when the next chapter is available. Please email me at janice_loar@hotmail.com if you have the time. Thank you.
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Title: Medatsu-chan
Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 09:04 CST
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Amazing as usual andi expect the rest of the chapters to follow at those standards
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Reviewed By: BRL On: January 09, 2004 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again! And I'd just like to say that, once more, even withOUT a cliffy, you leave me hanging on your every word! Jeez...I'm usually not so hung-up on a story, but there are, you must admit, a lot of very good Kag/Sess stories. But most of them follow the same lines: InuYasha picks Kikyou instead of Kagome, Kagome runs away and meets Sesshoumaru...etc. You know how it goes. As a matter of fact, I'm almost positive you know a few like that that are very good,too! But I'm SO into your new-kind of plot. Not the high-school drama (that I also love! lol!) or the feudal betrayal scenario (nothing against them at all!)--your plot is very fresh and reguvinating,(
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Reviewed By: Black Rose Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, wow! What can I say? I'll start by saying this; I read a lot of fanfiction and I do mean a LOT, and I haven't had the fortune to stumble across such a well-written story in so long a time! Of course you should continue this story! I love your descriptions and you keep everyone so well in character! I'm thinking as hard as I can to not give a straight-out praise-all review, because there is ALWAYS room for improvment, but right now, I can't really think of anything to improve on as of yet. Just keep this story going and you'll have a devoted reader until the end! ~BRL
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Title: still the best
Reviewed By: sakura yamakawa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 01:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! that was a nice chapter!!! i can't wait for more kag/sess interaction! And Sess is a violinist?! me too! [although... i probably suck~_~;;] now, i seriously didn't see Kouga and Sess working on 'The Trio' with Kagome... true, they're really good but did you have to make Kouga so... i dunno... a baka?! wait. what am i saying?! he IS a baka!!! delete that line from your memeory... i liked the way you wrote it and you sure have a talent... wish i could write half as well... and it sucks that you don't have more reviews! now write, darn ya! or i'll tie you to your chair and handcuff your legs to the computer. And you'll be stuck there with only a wand between your teeth so you can still write!!! Cherry: please ignore sakura right now... Fox gave her a 'good time' last night so she's a bit... 'hyper'... AM NOT!!! Cherry: what she means is, she really liked your story and would enjoy it very much if you'd write more. SOON! Cherry: soon. good day to you... BYE!!!! ^_^ :P
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Title: still the best
Reviewed By: sakura yamakawa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 01:39 CST
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Title: Medatsu
Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely story and I would hate for you not to continue so please! If it helps any...your on my favorites list
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Title: Kiki Smythe
Reviewed By: kikitravel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 08:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMGosh! love this! I LOVe the way you DIDN'T use the feudal Era in this. The music seem to give the fic a romantic feel. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: EvilNekoEatsYourSoul [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 05:35 CST
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Hello, I really enjoyed reading these first two chapters and am looking forward to an update. They were both pretty long chapters so I wouldn't mind seeing them somewhat shorter, but whatever you decide is good. Good luck with your writing.
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Reviewed By: EvilBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 02:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Faboo. Really. Very nicely done, can't wait to read more.
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Title: get off of your lazy ass and update!
Reviewed By: sakura yamakawa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry up and update!!! i'm waiting in suspense here! i wanna see what happens... who gets Kagome??? Sess or Inu? me personally, i don't have a problem if either of them gets her... they can have a threesome for all i care! as long as you write it well... and i enjoy.... then everyones happy! Btw... i'm not going to stop pestering you until you update this thing! so you better get ready for all the reviews!!!! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: sakura yamakawa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 08:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ne! i really love your story so... can you like, update it??? i'm chewing on my pillow cause i'm wondering what's gonna happen!!! please update!!!
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Reviewed By: Hello, Hi, Goodbye On: November 21, 2003 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel no reason for me to give even constructive critism. I like your story, hope to see a soon update!
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Reviewed By: RED DAY On: November 20, 2003 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is gonna be a good story, provided that the story sticks to their relationships!! Of course they could all 3 love music! Now just let the story flow!!!
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 07:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usualy never give this kind of review but you've erned it!! i absolutly loved it I will be waiting for an update...
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