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Reviewed By: sakura yamakawa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 07:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a perfect score for you, as per usual... I was just wondering when you are going to update again... you haven't in so long that I was forced to write you another review. Though I don't mind reading truly good stories over and over again... It gets a bit, redundant, whenever I read the same 3 chapters again... considering that I have most of your story so far infused into my mind permanently... Please update soon though everyone knows that you can't rush genius but, this time, I don't mind giving it a little prod if I thought that it would give you a little enjoyment. I really love reading your story and would like to read more. Please don't abandon this story... maybe your muse will still give you inspiration for it some day in the future. One never knows, ne?
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Reviewed By: Black Rose Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 19:33 CDT
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Oh, I really wish that you would update soon! I realize and understand completely if that is impossible at the time, or perhaps you've just tired of this story, but I hope not! You have such a...beautiful way with words! I strive to achieve the same painting of letters in my own story(stories) but I guess that a plotline such as yours requires the enrichment that you give so well. I hope that you haven't forgotten this story, because it really is wonderful. Thank you for your time. Best of luck, wishes, and regards, Black Rose Lady
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Reviewed By: sakura yamakawa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 09:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why don't you update? are you in some kind of trouble or something where you can't write anymore or are you just lazy? maybe your muse ran away? Please, i'm begging! I really love your story and have been waiting and waiting and waiting and you haven't updated! Ya know that even once a month would be okay right??? It's fine 'cause you have long chapters anyway... Please, for the sake of all that is holy in the aniverse... please update soon!!! love lots... cherry
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Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is wonderful, and I love how you associate music into it. *squeals in delight* Sesshoumaru is a violinist just like me!!!! ^_^ I know of this song, it's called B.T., and it's from the anime .hack//SIGN. It's a beautiful song, and it's a violin and piano duet. You can find the sheet music for it at animescores.com. I think it would be wonderful it you include that song in the fanfic, (like a Kagome and Sesshoumaru duet). Well...update soon, okee? And long chapters RULE!
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Reviewed By: keistje [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just recently gotten into reading Kag/Sess fanfiction, and still prefer to read of them in circumstances different from the show. I have to say, yours is one of the best I have ever read. You have a definite talent for writing, and your flair for descriptions allows the reader to play your scenes in their mind as if watching a movie. You seem to have really grasped the nuiances behind the characters personalities and have used that while placing them in this unusual situation. I am not a music major, but I played the clarinet for 7 years, so I understand the love of great music that flows behind this story. I greatly look forward to following your story to its end. I would love to know when the next chapter is available. Please email me at janice_loar@hotmail.com if you have the time. Thank you.
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Title: Medatsu-chan
Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 09:04 CST
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Amazing as usual andi expect the rest of the chapters to follow at those standards
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Reviewed By: BRL On: January 09, 2004 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again! And I'd just like to say that, once more, even withOUT a cliffy, you leave me hanging on your every word! Jeez...I'm usually not so hung-up on a story, but there are, you must admit, a lot of very good Kag/Sess stories. But most of them follow the same lines: InuYasha picks Kikyou instead of Kagome, Kagome runs away and meets Sesshoumaru...etc. You know how it goes. As a matter of fact, I'm almost positive you know a few like that that are very good,too! But I'm SO into your new-kind of plot. Not the high-school drama (that I also love! lol!) or the feudal betrayal scenario (nothing against them at all!)--your plot is very fresh and reguvinating,(
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Reviewed By: Black Rose Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, wow! What can I say? I'll start by saying this; I read a lot of fanfiction and I do mean a LOT, and I haven't had the fortune to stumble across such a well-written story in so long a time! Of course you should continue this story! I love your descriptions and you keep everyone so well in character! I'm thinking as hard as I can to not give a straight-out praise-all review, because there is ALWAYS room for improvment, but right now, I can't really think of anything to improve on as of yet. Just keep this story going and you'll have a devoted reader until the end! ~BRL
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Title: still the best
Reviewed By: sakura yamakawa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 01:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! that was a nice chapter!!! i can't wait for more kag/sess interaction! And Sess is a violinist?! me too! [although... i probably suck~_~;;] now, i seriously didn't see Kouga and Sess working on 'The Trio' with Kagome... true, they're really good but did you have to make Kouga so... i dunno... a baka?! wait. what am i saying?! he IS a baka!!! delete that line from your memeory... i liked the way you wrote it and you sure have a talent... wish i could write half as well... and it sucks that you don't have more reviews! now write, darn ya! or i'll tie you to your chair and handcuff your legs to the computer. And you'll be stuck there with only a wand between your teeth so you can still write!!! Cherry: please ignore sakura right now... Fox gave her a 'good time' last night so she's a bit... 'hyper'... AM NOT!!! Cherry: what she means is, she really liked your story and would enjoy it very much if you'd write more. SOON! Cherry: soon. good day to you... BYE!!!! ^_^ :P
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Title: still the best
Reviewed By: sakura yamakawa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 01:39 CST
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Title: Medatsu
Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely story and I would hate for you not to continue so please! If it helps any...your on my favorites list
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Title: Kiki Smythe
Reviewed By: kikitravel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 08:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMGosh! love this! I LOVe the way you DIDN'T use the feudal Era in this. The music seem to give the fic a romantic feel. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: EvilNekoEatsYourSoul [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 05:35 CST
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Hello, I really enjoyed reading these first two chapters and am looking forward to an update. They were both pretty long chapters so I wouldn't mind seeing them somewhat shorter, but whatever you decide is good. Good luck with your writing.
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Reviewed By: EvilBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 02:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Faboo. Really. Very nicely done, can't wait to read more.
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Title: get off of your lazy ass and update!
Reviewed By: sakura yamakawa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry up and update!!! i'm waiting in suspense here! i wanna see what happens... who gets Kagome??? Sess or Inu? me personally, i don't have a problem if either of them gets her... they can have a threesome for all i care! as long as you write it well... and i enjoy.... then everyones happy! Btw... i'm not going to stop pestering you until you update this thing! so you better get ready for all the reviews!!!! ja ne!
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