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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 19:34 CDT
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I didn't like when you used internet slang in your story. When I read something I want to have real words and not something that people use when they're too lazy to write te whole word out. It makes me think that you don't take what you write seriously. I did enjoy the story, however, and that was the only thing I found to complain about. It did put a big old cheshire cat grin on my face when Naruto was screaming at Sauske at the end and about the whole 'dealing with 20 of me thing.' I could just imagine that, strangely enough. It was a good read. Thanks. Ja!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 22:12 CST
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WOW that was great i love it and i cant wait to see what happends next so update it really soon ok thanks tootles.
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Reviewed By: TorturedSaviour99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 04:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love NaruSasu fics so this was a wonderful fic, you need to do one with 20 Narutos molesting poor Sasuke!
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Reviewed By: ShawnyV-Chan On: May 12, 2005 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luved it. I can't get enough of this pairing and I luv this story! I luv U! Please continue I die without my daily dose of SasNaru Yaoi!!!!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 01:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED that "Your ASS is mine." that was GREAT:D
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage (signed out) On: November 11, 2004 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THAT LAST TIME!! OMG!!! 'Cuz now that i like your kink, your ass is mine!" THAT WAS AWESOME!!! do you have another story that continues this...? *goes off and looks*
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Reviewed By: ladyflame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 07:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I read this and the prequel, and please please could you write more!! More SasuNaruSasu goodness please!!
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Reviewed By: ice-lolli333 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this one is so much better than the last! I love it! aaahhhhh!!!! it's so great! you must write more! oh, but I think that without the earlier one, it wouldn't have been as good. yeah. it's great.
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Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 21:22 CDT
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wooooohoooooo! too naughty! what fun that was! good job cdk
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