| "Flame Goddess" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Why not do alternate endings with both Kurama/Kagome and one with Hiei/Kagome. Can't wait to see if they all get together to save the rest of the friends in the lab and what they do to the scientist and Naraku.
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Reviewed By: hieisgurl On: March 06, 2005 11:53 CST
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hey could you send me the picks that relate to this fic? i also think it should be a hiei kagome because they are both fire types and they would be just sooo cute to geather my emale is daddysgirl_42_14@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: November 03, 2004 08:30 CST
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Hey, I'm checking up on ya, and it says here that you haven't updated in... A YEAR!!! T_T Please, this is such a good beginning! Hiei/Kag :P
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 20:56 CST
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this is SUCH a good story!! i really hope u update soon!!! omg im begging here this is the best fanfic ive read it is so good i cant wait for the next chapter!! im on my knees here! please dont make me cry!
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Reviewed By: shadow girl 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
boy, your stories are way, WAY cool!
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Title: whats luv
Reviewed By: kizu no kazu On: December 20, 2003 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiei/kagome,hiei/kagome!!k,everything is good wen kagome is found by her cuz-n,trina-long brownish-gold hair up 2 her waist,dark blue eyes,wearing white baggy pants,white jacket showing a white bikini top,and air force one shoes.it happens wen trina is street racing(on tha news),and yuske,kuwabara,and keiko takes kagome to the streets of bloods/crips to find her cuz.wen they find her,kurama,and hiei were getting killed,but trina(ace),comes to resuce them.they discovered that kagomes cuz-n is a vampire and is part of the most wanted,cold hearted bloods known as "The Royals".wen they take her to koenma,koenma jumps in joy to see is niece.later on,they all go to a club called "The Jump off" where vampires come and hang.trinas job-bar tender,rapper/singer.her hobbys-street racing,dancing,fighting,and playing wit peoples mind.tri's powers-fire and lighting.her lover-kurama.
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon 22000 On: December 04, 2003 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hiei/Kag b/c i like Hiei/Kag fics is that hiei well never new love and has a iceie heart the only person that he really cares for is his sister yukina. That brings me to Kagome she is loving and careing she helps people when she can, and she can melt Hiei's cold Heart that's why there good for each other that's why i like Sess/kag pairing anyhoo keep it up K
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Title: plzplzplzplzp continiue
Reviewed By: amanda01 On: November 24, 2003 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz plz plz continue ill be waitng for your update and plz plz plz plz let it be kur/kag/hiri since some peps will be depressed!!
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Reviewed By: lil_angel_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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kagome and kurama. i love that paring. if you know any good ones, email me at jennynaheelee@sbcglobal.net thanx!
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