| "Golden Gaze" Reviews/Comments [ 192 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anonymus On: January 30, 2004 23:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way its going, but I'd like to see some more fluff! Your portrayal of Kagome is very good. PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE update soon!!
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Title: ch 11
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 01:56 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*snickers* Actually, I read that little story on ff.net... the one in your author's note. It was about... Jaken and his obsession with Sesshoumaru! Muahahahahah! *blinks* I don't believe that I actually have something in common with that toad... You should post it as a separate story/one-shot about "someone's" obsession with Sesshoumaru. I could never blame the toad... who can?? Sesshoumaru is my sex god. Oh hell, Youko Kurama is too... there can be TWO sex gods, can't there??? Anyway... Kagome has to transfer to another school? That is comPLETE BS!!! But a great way to progress the story. ;) *giggles incessently* Doesn't Inu USUALLY deserve an ass kicking?? Sorry, but it's TRUE... *grins* Youko reminds me of Sesshoumaru too... I think THEY should be brothers!! ^.^ Dumas Inu... Youko can't go through the well because he already exists in the future!! Seesh. We can't have him cause a paradox NOW before Youko hooks up with Kagome... Kagome in Sarayashki Junior High... HELL yeah!!! *grins* Something tells me that she's going to meet Kurama soon !!!!! ^___________^ Write more and mostly... post the next chapters HERE on mm.org! :)
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Title: Damn emotions! ch10
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 01:36 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*lmao* I LOVED the opening of chapter 10! Poor 'roku. ^_~ Inuyasha has a heart in this fic... one of your goals for this story if I remember. I actually feel sorry for him... but I think Kagome deserves someone more... masculine. ;) *lol* Not that I'm not with an Inuyasha myself. What can I say... Kagome and I are suckers. Sweet guys and hot bods... oh yeah! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: January 29, 2004 18:44 EST
Comment/Review:
Thanks for updateing! I would have asked you to update but your on my fave list! adios!
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Reviewed By: Silver Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 10:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooo.... I like! Please write more! Please? Good-good! (gone crazy.... back soon...) Loved the fic, but that last chapter was really much too short! Waaah! Then again, I read it all at once, so... I guess I shouldna complain too much. But please make chapter 10 much longer! Please-ness? Oh well. Don't listen to the crazy-person, listen to all the people who feel the same as the crazy-person. Kays? Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Caladriel On: January 17, 2004 23:38 EST
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GAH!! You stopped! No!!! Evil cliffie! *sobs* Please please please please please (you get the point) update soon. Onegai?? This is such a good fic. I am in awe of your writing powers. Once again...update?? Ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 16:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Wowwowwowwowwowwowwowwowwow This is great! Please continue it's one of the best that's up right now.
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Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin *forgot to sign in first* On: December 28, 2003 01:12 EST
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Happy belated fifteenth birthday!! ^_^ You were born on the shortest day of the year... lucky. ;) Hope your holiday season is treating you well and inspiring you! ^.~
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 19:00 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Please update soon.
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Title: *one FINAL note.... for this chapter*
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 01:32 EST
Comment/Review:
Youko needs to wipe away Kagome's tears and snuggle up with her by the fire!!!! *blinks* O-kay, we know who's had too much caffine tonight...
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Title: chapters 8&9
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 01:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thanks for those emails... I really love this story so far. In fact, since you told me that ff.net has more chapters... I've had to FIGHT my browser from taking me there. ;) How could I DARE fight off my Youko... I must be nuts. I'm sorry, I can't help it. I LOVE these lines: "His woman was becoming aroused. By some other youkai." *snickers* Yay!! Hiei! (Can I help it if I have a small Hiei fetish too?) Uhhh.. I don't know if I noticed her place the shard on him or not, but... go Kagome! WTF... ch9 was WAY too short. It had no chance of quenching my thirst. I NEED more!!!!!! Or else I run off to ff.net and read them... But if I do that, you'll have to notify me EVERY time you update there! (Personally, I think you need more mm.org reviews anyway-- nevermind the fact that ff annoys me) Gah!! Youko, where are you????????? To make up for ch9, chapter 10 MUST have Kagome/Youko interaction. If it doesn't... then you already wrote/posted it on ff.net, you sneak. ;) Write more of this AND post it HERE. ^_~
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Title: Great so Far!
Reviewed By: Narani On: December 19, 2003 13:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your story! I do hope you update it as soon as you can! This one is on FF.NET too right? Cause I think I saw it on there once, no matter. I like this story of yours, and I KNOW its going to end very well, it just has too. And what gets to me is, What exactly is going to happen? Is she going to be with Youko or Kurama in the future? Its actually kind of confusing and makes you want to REALLY know what happens next. Great job on this! Keep it up k?! ^_^ ~Narani
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Title: I want to share
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 16:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that for a true blue Inuyasha x Kagome lover...would find it hard to write a story where kagome and inuyasha arn't together, excpecialy when your not going to kill him off, or make him a jerk...I'm dreading and looking forward to when Inuyasha *might* leave Kagome, I'll bet you'll make me cry for sure
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: December 18, 2003 15:25 EST
Comment/Review:
Love it! Keep writing! Adios!
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Title: insanity
Reviewed By: alalalalalalalala On: December 17, 2003 13:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh dear god is it a requierment that you have to beinsane to write a good fan fic *shakes head* oh well good job and keep going
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