| "Golden Gaze" Reviews/Comments [ 192 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Black Kat On: December 16, 2003 21:10 EST
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update please hurry....hurry....I want to know what happens next! Ja!
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Title: *forgot something*
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 01:30 EST
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OH! More on that Sess/Genie idea... funny is good and nice to read, but I VERY much love angst. (Throw in humor anyway sometimes to lighten the mood so you won't find yourself crying as you write. Yup, that happens to me too.) It's the only thing I can write ALmost well, anyway. Plus, it gives us authors more opportunities to torture Sess. I mean, since he's so cold in the anime (except around Rin)... I just LOVE breaking through that ice. Well, I'd like to, anyway. Maybe I should stick to writing emotionless characters. As soon as I TRY to give them hearts, they start crying. *lol* j/k I'm not THAT bad-- okay, maybe I am. *Listening to "My Immortal" by Evanescence and always thinks of Sesshoumaru* I'm just too emotional for my own good some days. Well, every day. Take care! ^_^
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Title: *hooked on Youko*
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 01:18 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*chuckles* Just why IS Youko's tone so seductive??? Whether chuckle, words, or her name... I can't get enough. I just love his smirk to death! :) *snickers* Heh heh heh. I've read IY fics where Kagome sees Inu and Kikyo... but this just kicks their butt!! He saw, right? *evil chuckles* Ha ha, Kagome's getting more action that YOU!! And what a man... whoo! (That was brutal to read-- in the sense that I was jealous as Hell.) Thanks for sending me that email, it was completely sweet of you. ^_^ When you update on MM.org, they'll tell me when you update so you don't have to. I'll have to resist reading the other chapters on ff.net. Why? So you'll get more reviews here, of course. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed the review. That was one of my less insightful ones and probably my more... (there's no nice way to put this)... excited view. Heh. To me Youko is a drug. I need more of him and this story. ^.~ OH, on your notes... 1)More information on future projects in your profile is optional. I do that rarely myself :) ...2)Personal websites are cool. I should have one myself because I've WAY too many fics to post and keep up with. As scatterbrained as I am, I never finish many of them :( ...3)*snickers* I just LOVE torturing Sesshoumaru!!! Could it explain why I've cast him in all my (unposted/finished) IY fics to date? And the genie idea rocks! I just LOVED that old show "I Dream of Jeannie!" So you know, if the story's good... then we readers don't care if it's an OC or not, really. Well, that's true for me, anyway. ...4)Um, well, I hope Suuichi DOES meet Kagome in her time. AND I want them to end up together in this story. But that's me. Do NOT be another "Forces of Nature." I just HATED that ending SO much! Killing Kikyo's always a plus. ;) j/k Torturing Inu is fun. ...5)Your fic marked as my favorite on BOTH sites! ^_^ You want fic ideas?? *fidgets* As the queen of The Block, I have HUNDREDS of fic ideas (in many fandoms) that never work out. Mostly 'cause I suck as an author. :P I only have half as many unfinished stories. For instance, even though I have 2 IY fics posted online I also have... at least 5 others that I've been working on and off on. And I mean uber pages for some of them. I have this NASTY habit of never thinking my work is ready enogh to post. Plus, I forget to format stuff. *heh* Okayokay... did that review rival the length of your author's notes? Sorry about that. I got a little... hyper after reading that new chapter. Youko is still my sex god! (Btw, even though your bio says your 15, you have a greater grasp of the language than I did at your age. Compared to you, I'm old. 20. *heh*)
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Title: Awsome!
Reviewed By: Robin5791 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 17:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI! Yeah I love this chapter! Please update soon! I understand what it's like to be in writers block! lol. Anyways I read your Authors Note and I just want to say I love the idea about the Shesshomaru and Genie story! I think it should be humor with a pinch of seriousness. Anyways...keep up the good work! Robin
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Reviewed By: Rin_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 15:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-^^- Yay! Another perfect chappy! I wish I had as much talent as you do in writing. .__.;; *hasn't written anything yet in mediaminer, and is having a writer's block anyway* >.>
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Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 20:24 EST
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Love fic! If your writer's block has something to do with muse problems, candy always works for mine. Keep going! I don't have any ideas for fics sorry. I read the bios sometimes also! Adios!
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Title: @_@
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 19:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh gawd did inuyasha seee it? You know it would serve him right though...he might be able to see things from Kagome's point of view... I can't wait tell the next chapter comes out
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: rosie13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 18:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
jeez, this fic just keeps getting BETTER!!!!!!! Ugh, I love you (not literally!) but i hate you. I luv ya cuz this is such a good fic, but i hate you cuz this si such a good fic!!!! grrr i wish I cud write... I have my own fuic, but tis no good. Anyway, just ta tell ya, i dont really read author's profiles. I don't see any important info in them. Thats just me. I think I may have a plot in mind, so I'll email you and see what you think! Well, update soon, and dont stop writing...ummm.. good! :)
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Reviewed By: dunken [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 15:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story! i can't wait for the next chapter although it is kind of touchy as far as the guys go(um, no pun intended. hehe) so anyway, is shuichi going to meet and recognize kagome? what's gonna happen next? i really can't wait for the next chapter. oh and naraku's death scene was great. if you have ideas still, you should make a series of horrible deaths for him to go through. it would be highly amusing.
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Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin (not logged in because mm.org is being onry) On: December 09, 2003 03:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! I need more, dammit, MORE!!!! *blinks* Can you tell that I have this Youko Kurama fetish? Inu may be cute and Sesshoumaru hot... but Youko is a SEX GOD!!!!! *drools* I have these wild and hot visions of Kagome cleaning up, with Youko joining her;), dancing through my head. Can't you write more soon? Please? I need my nakie Youko!!!! *snickers* I think you're right when you said he has this... intoxicating, powerful sexual aura around him that draws me in like a magnet! ^_^ I need my fix. I can't WAIT for Youko/Kagome interaction. I've been doting on Sesshoumaru of late and noticed the odd resemblance between Inu and Youko... but pairing him with Kagome??? Why didn't I think of that!?!? Kurama needs someone to love... BADly. *sniffles* POOR Suichi! Is he just going to have to deal with vivid memories of them?? That's SO unfair. Everyone needs lovin'! Could you email me when you update? (duo_no_tsuin@yahoo.com) This fic is as intoxicating as its subject. ^.~
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Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 00:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic!! i really dont care if inu dies cause i dont like him for what he does to kagome. anyway plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: Robin5791 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 07:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS AWSOME! Oh I hope Inu and Yoko don't fight! Who will Kagome choose? Yoko right? Oh but poor Inuyasha that will be a heartbreak... Please update soon! Also if you don't mind please review my fic.
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Reviewed By: Rin_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 02:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you added the cliffies to your chapters. *nod nod* It leaves a sense of suspense. Please update soon -^^-
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Title: I love it!
Reviewed By: BC On: December 04, 2003 20:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Robin5791 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 15:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awsome!! I can't believe you don't think you did good! I'll go read the other chapters now.
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