| "I'd Trade It All" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 19:46 CDT
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i loved the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aswome and wonderful creativity i was so instrested in it i read it all in 1 night i loved it lots!
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Title: OMG wat the fuck is wrong w/me
Reviewed By: star2bcaught [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMFOA, HOLY SHIT, I'M SO FUCKIN HYPER. LOL WOW I STARTED SINGING YOU FIC. IT WAS SO WEIRD. CAUSE I THOUGHT IT WAS QUOTED SONG BUT GUESS WAT... IT WASNT LOLOL. AND THEN I STARTED READING IT OUT LOUD OMG. AAAAH IT WAS FREAKY DICKEY LOOLLOIFDSJ;LKSDIUA;LKJSLKJGDAS;LKJ
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Reviewed By: shushiking aka black death On: July 29, 2004 18:29 CDT
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Wahhhh you are so good I can't do anything like that you sould really write a sequeal But don't make kagome to girlly Becaue I 'm seeing the changes the story progresses
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 11:33 CDT
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THE BOMB. THATS WHY KIKYO GOT WHAT SHE DESERVED. *TURNS HEAD TO THE SIDE AND MUTTERS," KIKYOS A BITCH"*
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Reviewed By: Serenity20 On: June 22, 2004 13:15 CDT
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Really good story, i first read it awhile again and waited for updateds and finlly it is finished and i must say it was a really good stoey.. hope to see the sequal soon byessss
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Reviewed By: LoSt_gUrL8o8 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...now that was a great story...I couldnt stop readin it...all of the other stories are good but urs takes the cake..I love it...I hope to see your sequel to this...I bet it'll be even more romantic than this one...great story..
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Reviewed By: Anna#1 On: June 20, 2004 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story so much it was so much fun to read!!!! It made me cry a couple of times but thats a good thing cuz not alot of pplz storys make me cry that means it really got to me and it was very good!!!! I really want to read more stories like yours so keep going ok and don't stop cuz it was really good!!!!!!! Anyways keep writing and I hope to read more of your stories!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil68 On: June 20, 2004 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CAN I JUST SAY I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!! I THOUGHT IT WAS GRATE!!!! I LIKED EVERYTHING IN THE STORY LOL WRITE MORE WRITE MORE I LOVED IT LOL!!! ANYWAYS KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK IT WAS GRATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ishkabod On: June 20, 2004 07:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well the reasoning is everyone can improve and i have three classes of writers You are a good writer and i couldn't see many falts in your writeing except the author notes that constantly break up the flow of the story. You need to work on that. one other thing is your sentence structure on occasion is confusing. A beta reader will help in that area. Your writeing overall is very very very very enjoyable and i encourage you to write some more. You have potential to become a really really really good writer but the author notes really hurt the flow of the story. I'm really enjoying the story so Thanks for writing. Ishkabod (you can find my profile at ff.net if you wanna comment on this review)
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Reviewed By: Ishkabod On: June 20, 2004 07:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well the reasoning is everyone can improve and i have three classes of writers You are a good writer and i couldn't see many falts in your writeing except the author notes that constantly break up the flow of the story. You need to work on that. one other thing is your sentence structure on occasion is confusing. A beta reader will help in that area. Your writeing overall is very very very very enjoyable and i encourage you to write some more. You have potential to become a really really really good writer but the author notes really hurt the flow of the story. I'm really enjoying the story so Thanks for writing. Ishkabod (you can find my profile at ff.net if you wanna comment on this review)
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Title: WAAHHH!!!
Reviewed By: Naotas Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 19:15 CDT
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omg i haven't even read your fic yet (i copy and paste them into a wordpad to read later) AND IT SEEMS SO GOOD!!! (AND FLUFFY!! ^-^) oh well i really want to read it!! Ja ne!
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Title: oh my god
Reviewed By: XOXOinuLOVER_luna On: June 15, 2004 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"oh my.....GOD....h-how did....y-you do this.... AWSOME FIC!!!!!!!!!" *starts jumping around happly while people start to stare at me like im crazy* {O_O!!!} "WHAT I JUST LOVE THE FIC YA CRAZY PEOPLE!!!!!" {^_~!!!} "sorry for the STARING PEOPLE!!!!!" *starts bitching at them* "sorry for keeping ya wating cuz of these jackasses" anyway,this is my first time reading this so sorry if i didn't review in the past,but i hope that you can put up the next chapter soon because i really love your work.im not going to be able to check for another week,sorry,but please have it up by then" {P.S. if you dont i will cry T_T!!!!!} love ya much,Luna the gansta girl
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