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| "Daddy's Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved your story!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved your story!!!!!!!!
| Title: Pure gold
Reviewed By: Janeth Rhian [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one is pure gold. As Eowyn Rav said, I also think this story breaks the mold when in comes to the overly done Mary Sue theme. I am huge fan of MS storys that can do this without beating the reader to death on proving "how special the original character is". I love it when fan writers can create a good solid character, who can act like a person instead of a delusion running wild. The OC Toshi does have all the elements of what makes a Mary Sue, but the writer has woven together a good plot, energetic prose on Jigen's past, funny dialogue, AND has done an excellent job of keeping all of the Lupin gang in their true character! This is very hard to accomplish. "Daddy's Girl" has some good moments. The chemistry between Jigen and Toshi is real. Jigen vs Fujiko with their dislike of each other, but their underlining physical attraction towards the other is edgey. Clueless and honorable Geomon caught between his affection for Toshi and his samurai code. Lupin is just plain funny. We see another side of Zenigata in this fiction. A darker more rough then in the anime. I like the twist in his character. We have yet to see what happens with Toshi's lawyer Mom. Stars across the board here. Two thumbs up. Keep up the great work. Looking forward to the next chapters.
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: yukino On: January 02, 2004 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this fic! you rock...It would be so cool if you wrote a sequel to this telling what toshiko's mother thinks and what happens to everyone! This was really great...the only thing wrong were the spelling errors but the definetely did not affect how the story was read. Rock On!
| Title: Friggin' Great
Reviewed By: Eowyn Ravenmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one hell of the great fan fiction! You have all the characters in the Lupin gang down pat. Toshicho is not your average Mary Sue. Thank you for not making her a dull witted twit. Toshi does not take over the whole story that is where the MS factor is broken here. Like other MS rated fan fiction, I hate Mary Sues that due that. This is not the case. Jigen and Fuji's physical attraction vs their mutaul hate for each other is so well done. I love the Jigen will get ... maybe a girlfriend in Toshi... yeah he needs some lovin'. I do love Lupin slash with LupinxJigen, but I still feel that these characters are still straight. Fine work.
| Title: This was seriously good
Reviewed By: Rhia_san On: December 28, 2003 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very nice fiction to get lost in on a cold winter night. Loved the back story on Jigen and the stripper! Goemon in a motorcycle get up! Priceless.
| Title: Just me
Reviewed By: bekka_mouri_hibiki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 10:30 CST
Comment/Review:
I just dropped by to say that I'm glad to see so many of you are checking out Daddy's Girl. If you've read 'Love Potion Fujiko Mine' then you know this won't be short ^-^ Anywho, I still have a ton of tricks up my sleeve and a few surprises too ^_~.
| Reviewed By: Leela_ Debris On: December 21, 2003 02:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really want to say that I like your fic, it was great so far, I think that this a very different idea, I like it so much becasue of all that talking that is going on, in a way it kind of shows me the Lupin crew when the cameras are off so to speak lol. Its like you are showing there way of life on the inside with all of there conversations, and thoughts, I also like how you are showing Fujiko and Jigen's relationship, its very real. the lemon parts are good too, becasue it is not just a pointless lemon, it shows how Fujiko really works, (becasue there is no way she can play all her men with out screwing a few, to be honest). I also like how Toshiko is not a mary sue character, you give her enough lines and importance in the fic without her out shining the rest. I really can't wait for what you have in mind next. I wouldn't mind some lemon action between Lupin and Toshiko though lol. great job, and keep them coming!!
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