| "Kits, Cats, and Ryu" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 00:55 CDT
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This fic hits a very intersting idea, sadly it fails to really follow through with it. Not only do events happen so fast with almost no detail the readers are left asking huh? But the speed of this fic also makes some rather out of character moments, without any real explinations to back it up. Most the events could of happend, but especialy the intial dialog and build up of the three guys and the 'animal viliage' bit could of used a lot more effort to explain it so the readers could believe those changes a little more easily. Then of course this fic is several years old and marked complete I doubt we will see it continue.
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Reviewed By: TShrieken [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that Ranma should end up with Hinata, cause she's closer to his own age. Also, Naruto might end up with Sakura, for obvious reasons. I can't think of anyone for Recca, though. Also, if you still need a reader, I know al three series completely. Read them all the way through, so I know the characters. If you want to contact me, email at torishrieken@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Felicity_Angel46 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 18:00 CDT
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I love your story so much!!! I really hope to read more soon! :3
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Reviewed By: SilverShinwa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE This story is cool. You should update soon!
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Title: Umm...Tense please.
Reviewed By: Ryushi Nigami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I like this story, but the flow of your sentences are not quite what I'm used to. In fact, One might say that your tense is much to present for a good flow. If anything, revising your story in the past tense would help greatly. (^^; I used to write in present tense until this little fact was pointed out, and now my writing is so much better XD)
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Reviewed By: akumagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 00:59 CST
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NARUTOxSASUKE! NARUTOxSASUKE! NARUTOxSASUKE! or sasunaru whatever you prefer. and if you do put ranma with either hinata or anko, i'd prefer if it were hinata. anko just seems too old and hinata is just too cute. also UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! please?
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Reviewed By: neosildrake On: July 17, 2005 05:24 CDT
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hey! you haven't written another chapter for over 18 month! This story is great. I like team animal. about time someone kicks asses! and those animal-forms... purrrr....
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Reviewed By: ninja art On: July 01, 2005 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a good story, but its got a focus mainly on ranma. put more in about naruto. all this story needs is more details, on the surroundings and characters. update soon, its very good!
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 04:39 CST
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dude this story rocks but how about a super form for each of the animal forms, kind of like were-creatures, big strong muscular fast extreme healing due to the massive energy contained in it lets see some heavenly dragon ascension, yay!
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Reviewed By: megahellfire2002 On: February 12, 2005 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Over all good story. detail fight b/w ranma and lee. in some cases u rushed, for example the scene where ranma's team get the scroll and just leaves, susake's team just follows the path ranma created, there was no orochumaro (sp?). u did not get into other teams. a excellent story usually covers a lot of things and them into a final end. hopefully u'll update. it's been over a year since you haven't updated.
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Title: Uuuuwaaahhh !!!!
Reviewed By: Snowy Yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 02:58 CDT
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Why don't you update???? UUuuuwwwwwaaahhhhh!!!!! I'm not gonna write any review to you until you update. Plz Update!
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Reviewed By: naru/hina fan On: September 06, 2004 22:07 CDT
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naruto should be paired with hinata and um that's it bye now hehehe
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Title: cool story, and i thought of some pairings for you
Reviewed By: rose whip lash [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(stupid login wouldn't work so i had to make it anonymous) cool, i really like the story, and i think these pairings might work: Ranma/Anko(there ages are pretty close, so i think its a good idea, a 16/17(not really sure) and 12 year old is not right O_o) Naruto/Temari(she's used to living with a demon(A.K.A: Gaara), so she probably wouldn't mind having to live with Naruto) Recca/TenTen(i thought it might be a good pairing)
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Reviewed By: Johnvitt On: July 06, 2004 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the love of all the is holy! UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! PLease?
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Title: I'm Back for the updates!!!
Reviewed By: Snowy Yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 00:29 CDT
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Hei... did I miss anything? No.... when will ya update??? do update. . . . . .
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