| "Broken Heart, Open Mind" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: hmmm On: December 26, 2003 20:33 CST
Comment/Review:
yay you updated but plz plz plz dnt make this kouga/kag make it inu/kag oh and last chap was kinda confusing
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Reviewed By: happylama2202 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 18:34 CST
Comment/Review:
You know, I don't think that having sex with Kikyo would make anyone very happy. I mean, if she can't BLEED for pity's sake, how on earth would she be able to make love? I mean, there is definately an ALIVE prerequiste for that in my book...okay, just a mad ramble. In any case, I like your story and the plot just gets better with each chapter. Way to go!
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Reviewed By: erilin On: December 04, 2003 18:08 CST
Comment/Review:
keep writing! this is great!
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Reviewed By: lololol On: December 03, 2003 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im loving it
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Title: Dranged fanfic lover
Reviewed By: Debbietherex On: December 03, 2003 10:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy like this fic it is one of the most interesting I've ever read. I'm not realy sure why people haven't reviwed it but If you change the summery it might help. Lahela
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