| "Yugioh love stories" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: grape [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 23:39 CST
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Reviewed By: The Almighty Elena On: December 19, 2003 21:32 CST
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well i liked it but i couldnt tell who was talking and what was going on.so you need some work on the whole puncuational thingy.
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Reviewed By: grape [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 11:45 CST
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Reviewed By: ravyne On: December 19, 2003 09:08 CST
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Fairly decent fic, but the errors (grammatical, spelling & punctuation) make it difficult to follow. A bit of editing/clean-up would make this much easier to read.
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Reviewed By: grape [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 20:26 CST
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Reviewed By: grape [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 14:51 CST
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Reviewed By: shiko-sama On: December 13, 2003 14:48 CST
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it is harf to tell who is sayin what i think you should re do it so ppl can understand it better
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Reviewed By: FireAngel_Sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 00:00 CST
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I think it was all right, but I had troubled figuring out who was saying what sometimes.
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Reviewed By: al On: December 12, 2003 01:41 CST
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kind of hard to read but it was cute.
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