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"Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ]
 Reviewed By: LazyCatfish27 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 02, 2007 14:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Just read the note at the end of chapter 3 and wanted to let you know, the Mihoshi Special was released on DVD with the Pretty Sammy OAV btw, I like the story so far.
 Reviewed By: camintmier [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 26, 2003 11:39 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like the story sofar. It shows that Ryoko really isn't a mindless monster that Kagato made her to be, and shows that she's vunurable inside. I hope you write more to the story soon, as I'm anxious to read it.
 Reviewed By: SpaceCherry  On: November 11, 2002 21:38 CST
Comment/Review:
I think this was a great story and i hope that you continue with it. You have a great style of writing and making sense of everything!!!! Keep up the good work and maybe one day you'll write a real book!!!!
 Reviewed By: Red XIV [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 02, 2002 22:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
While this fic is well-written and interesting, it has one fundamental flaw: it contradicts the canon of the continuity it's based on. You see, in the Tenchi Muyo OAV series, Ryoko is immune to all forms of drugs and toxins. Not just resistant, completely immune. The only way any drug (alcohol, for example) can have an effect on her is if she consciously wills her body NOT to fight it off. Which ironically makes it impossible for Ryoko to get completely smashed when she drinks; if she gets too drunk, she can no longer concentrate enough to keep her body from eliminating the alcohol. But back to the point, you could pump Ryoko with enough tranquilizers to knock out 10,000 elephants, and she wouldn't even be slightly groggy.
 Reviewed By: Chibi Beji [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 28, 2002 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wowwie! Even though it took forever and a day to read, this was SO FREAKING AWESOME!! And there's going to be more?!!?! Woohooo!!!!!!! I can't wait!!!!!

And if it's possible, please email me whne you update at dbzfan@cox.net !! Thnak you much!
 Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 24, 2002 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Jesus holy shit Christ!


Very AWESOME!

You have a wonderful writing voice, not to overbearing with everything, but not passive. *applause* Beautiful work.
 Reviewed By: Chibi Beji [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 21, 2002 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm only up to the second chapter so far, but I must say, WOW. I'm too awestuck to say much else, I have to read more!
 Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 16, 2002 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
As I reviewed you on FFN before, this was a subject that could have been done terribly. But you did such a masterful job, I hope many with a similar subject will see you as a becon to having a well written story!
Hope to see the next chapter real soon!
dennisud
 Reviewed By: michelle  On: June 03, 2002 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You are a fantastic writer and I enjoyed your story very much. I admire the way that all of the events in your story tie back to one other. Even so, there is one thing that you did leave out that I think I should mention. Tenchi never did make up lossed time with ryoko after he came back from jurai with Aeka, even though he did promise,... I think.
 Reviewed By: celestejacobs [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 05, 2002 07:35 CDT
Rating(s):
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved your fanfic and i even cried in some parts. It was so real that I felt like I was there!! Great Job :)
 Reviewed By: Kristin  On: April 12, 2002 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This fanfic was absolutely amazing! Not only would it be hard to come up with a story that long, but to so thouroughly back up everything said in the story seems like it would be all but impossible for me. Great job!
 Reviewed By: Erik  On: April 08, 2002 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a beautiful series of stories. I especially enjoyed the way you have taken the various personalities and quirks from the OVA and shown reasons why they act the way they do. Especially Ryoko.
You need to check your spacing after commas in lists of names.
 Reviewed By: Gin tenshi [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 07, 2002 23:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your fanfic. It is so good, I wish theat I could write and make the characters as alive as you can
 Reviewed By: Jehosi [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 05, 2002 23:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, I can't believe nobody's reviewed your story yet! I love what have so far. Beautifully written. Keep up the outstanding job! ^_^

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