| "Bulletproof" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: silen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 19:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
not bad ;)
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Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: December 27, 2003 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost cried, but then I read the ending and I felt better. Great story.
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Reviewed By: ChaosHarbour On: December 14, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to write an alternate ending to that! It shouldn't be a happy ending!!! -Whining.- Kitty: u.u; Shut up already! -Sighing.- Fine. It was good, but maybe it's just because I love angst. It was the beginning. The end had me gagging with sap. Gomen nasai, I'm not necessarily a happy person. While I was reading this, a few lines to the ending I thought of were this: 'So I stood there watching as he turned away from me, from our relationship...if you could call it that. I made no move to stop Jounouchi, after all he deserved better than what I could give him. I couldn't truly ever express my love, and so eventually my heart may break. Goodbye, Jounouchi, my puppy.' -Sniffles.- Okies. It was better than just the short alternate ending I wrote. I suck at writing! >_
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Title: *smile*
Reviewed By: Yugi_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 13:42 CST
Comment/Review:
cute ^__^ Jus love Seto/Joey.
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