| "Shouya's New Technique" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: chibicat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 12:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was awesome story...........i really liked it but i think wouldn't it wouldbe better if Shouya wouldbe Naruto's daughter not his sister.....just wondering.....but it still awesome^_^
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Reviewed By: 2SEXY4U On: June 13, 2006 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!!!!!! that was so funny!!!!!! LOL!!! keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^~
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Reviewed By: Tomako Briefs [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute story! I was wondering why it wasn't just another chapter of The Seventh Day? I mean, it's part of the same story and all.. That aside, Shouya is adorable! Now I want a male version of me running around. Only my bed is big enough for two people. *shrug* ^_^ lol
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