| "Hideki's Confessions" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: nice work
Reviewed By: mr j On: June 06, 2005 04:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a good fic but u dont spell come like that its spelled like this cum that one if need help my email is josh20_3@hotmail.com and not saying u suck either and put a good lemon part in chapter 4 please k bye for now best one i have read so far
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Title: More
Reviewed By: Dreamrage [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is good so far...cant wait for more chapters
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Reviewed By: Zeana On: March 17, 2005 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very good..please write more^^
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Reviewed By: -*chii*- On: April 22, 2004 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi. i like chobits that's why i read this and ive heard of this before coz' i also read your ayashi no ceres fics. I only wrote 7 in the enjoymet coz next time you should put heat into it but i like it. thanks
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Reviewed By: Chobits fan On: March 05, 2004 14:16 CST
Comment/Review:
i really liked chapters one and 2 and no offence but if your going to have a whole chaptre about "IT" then you should try to go into more depth about how intimate it was (NOT like grose details) but that was something HUGE for them and to only do like one paragraph about it didnt really do it justice. put what you were going to write for chapter 4 in chapter 3 to make it longer would have been cool too. and again im not saying "you suck!" cuz i really liked one and 2 keep up the story! ^_^
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Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's pretty good. I WUV CHOBITS, and I'm thinking about writing one myself. ONCE I'm finshed w/ SERA MUUN!!! But update soon, I want to read more. And try to use complete sentences, and user spell check if you have windows. I know it's a pain to not have spell check. I don't have one, and I'm a TERRIBLE SPELLER. Well, anyway update soon, and write a lemon between Hideki-chan and Chi-chan next time!!! JA NE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: richelle On: January 02, 2004 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude you fuckin suck crusty old man ass!!!!! because you need more chapters and PLEASE make them long k k bye.(you don't have to suck crusty old man ass if and only if you take my advice but if not ya still do)luv ya have fun
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Reviewed By: Lord Raenef On: January 01, 2004 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good and I didn't notice any grammar mistakes probably cuz I'm so stupid but still this is really good!
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Reviewed By: Kyria the fallen angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 09:58 CST
Comment/Review:
No,as a reply to your review,hideki lover,you need to work on your grammar.Other than that,it's good.K?^_^
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: Yo On: December 23, 2003 22:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmm, i think you need a better hook, didn't quite catch my attention. It has promise, but grammar is key, if things are screwed up it distracts from the story.
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Reviewed By: EviLIchigo/Sheba On: December 22, 2003 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic was interesting, but you DO need to work on your english skills...But over all I enjoyed reading this even though I don't like chobits...
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Reviewed By: Dakki On: December 22, 2003 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an very intersting fanfic kinda simalr to the manga at first but its lovely. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kyria the fallen angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Err...I like it,but maybe you should work on your English skills ^_^Anyway,it's not bad,just,once again,lacking the proper punctuation,capitalization,etc.
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