| "Babysitting Mokuba" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Late.
Reviewed By: Arakayama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 08:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Late posting. Oh well. I like your stories. They were funny. ^^
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Reviewed By: IloveJoey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 20:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Im going to be harsh because of what happened to Joey. I love him hence the name and he is a tough guy not a barfer.Mokuba is 10 not 6 he justs looks young. Tea must die so dont make her normal or meet the me. I was hoping to meet DMG make a better title.
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Title: Sorry. . .
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 17:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I can't read anything above PG(Man, this is getting annoying to say in reviews) so sorry. I'm sure that it's good. InsaneAuthoress seems to like it. And your other story is good. So, I'm sure this is great. Sorry I couldn't give you a real review. . .
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reem: FUNNY ^_^ YAY FOR PIXIE DUST! Remasi: O_O Reem: Um whats wrong... Remasi: I had a dream and... MOKABA ATE ME AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Reem: Um okay anyway great story good beginning good ending good other stuff ^_^. Silly Seto Remasi: AHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 21:41 CST
Comment/Review:
once again funny funny funny! a lizard thinggy? like i siad in my last review longer! rewrite soon!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 20:37 CST
Comment/Review:
you should make it longer. like have where seto's going and mokaba begging to stay with the gang and so on. Other then that i find it funny mokaba is able to break so many things in so little time!
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