| "Chasing the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: SailorAvalon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 04:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Please write some more. I can't wait to see that happens next. I love your premise that, with Luna assumed dead, that Usagi's broach ends up broken and she's a different version of Sailor Moon because of it. I'm going to let my friends that are Sailor Moon fans know about your story. :) Thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of us. Marlyn
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Reviewed By: souichirobaeza [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 22:06 CST
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Good story, cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: PrincessFire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story. though the spelling and grammar could be a bit better. Very creative and original though. I can't wait for the next update, nor can I wait to see Serena's reaction when she sees that Luna is still alive.
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Reviewed By: PrincessFire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story, vey original and creative. It is a very fun read. I can't wait for the update and I want to see Serena's reaction when she sees that Luna is still alive.
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Reviewed By: silver unicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh thank you for updating I been waiting for ever... great new chapter please update again soon... you have a great way for telling a story.. but please keep updating!!!!!!
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Title: kool
Reviewed By: blackcat99955 On: March 05, 2005 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is so kool cant wate until the next chapters
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Reviewed By: Laura D On: December 10, 2004 14:10 CST
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I really love this story, I like the way you write it out--and each chapter keeps me wanting the next. Great writing, I'm interested to see what else you have in store--I also enjoyed the sneak peak you gave us! Mars is so angry! ^_^
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Reviewed By: kasei On: November 13, 2004 12:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your style, the mystery of the 'unseen' characters, and how the story develops. This really kept me at the edge of my seat. I was always anxious to know what would happen next. I really like this fic, it's awesome! I like how the senshi, especially Serena, are stronger (physically, emotionally and mentally). And it's great how the four generals of Earth are included. Can't wait for the story to continue.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Wolf 3400 On: November 11, 2004 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good. You've come up with a decently new concept (something rather rare in SM fics), you've got some nice twists, and I'm interested in seeing where you go with this.
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Reviewed By: moongoddess86 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 22:39 CST
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I don't know what your talking about, you are an amazing writer! Is Sailor Cresent supposed to be Sailor Moon? Thats kind of the feeling I was geting from what I read. Please update with the actual next chapter soon! I cannot wait! Wonderful author ;)
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Title: Suggestions
Reviewed By: darkprincessselene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you are on the right track with this future chapter. I am looking foward to see how things are going to develop in order for the story to get to this point. I do have a couple of suggestions, though. Your fight scenes are really good, but your spelling and grammar do need some work. I understand that this may be because it is a first draft, but just remember that. Also, the Senshi's words of power are their "henshin phrase" or when they tell one another to transform, the say "henshin yo!" I believe that your description of Rei's henshin stick is accurant. Feel free to email me with any questions-usagi_2901@yahoo.com. Love and Light, Ann
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Reviewed By: darkprincessselene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful fanfic and I think you should continue it! Don't let the fact that you don't have many reviews get you down; I have a fic posted on mm.org and so far it has no reviews. Just because you don't have any reviews doesn't mean that people do not like your story--people are lazy sometimes (I know I am). Write for the enjoyment of writing, and the fact that there are people you are enjoying your fic--don't leave us hanging!! Light and Love, Ann usagi_2901@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: moongoddess86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 23:59 CDT
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Happy;) I love to read new chapters! Please keep writing! Thanks for getting this one out so fast ;) Wonderful story idea all the way around.
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 00:49 CDT
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i agree with moongoddess, you have this excellent story that can go a lot of places, i hope that you can update it soon!
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Reviewed By: moongoddess86 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 22:35 CDT
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This is an amazing story. You need to keep posting BUT post more often PLEASE! I think this story could really go somewhere.
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