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 Title: My Team
Reviewed By: Raging koala [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 17, 2006 13:13 CST
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NAME: Raging Koala. RACE: Isane marsupial. Weapon: Talking Battle Axe of Bad Puns! Appearence: A blood red koala. Personality: Random and Insane. History: A long time ago I got exposed to radioactive snot. Now i have the ability to copy any attack from any anime or manga! Techniques: 1)The Grab a Teammate and Whack Your Enemy With Them Attack Move! (It is performed in the obvious way) 2)The Kopy Koala Attack (I say the name of the attack i want to copy, ex: Art of the Shadow Doppleganger). 3) Axe Pun Slice (My talking axe tells really bad puns which slowly rot the brain of the foe). Finsiher: Super Buff Jugernaut Formula Drink Formula (I drink a formula that makes me a super muscular unstoppable koala). Teammates: Naruto; Kenshin; Iso (A bounty hunter from one of my fan fics; His finsiher is the Ultimate Merman Slice [He fills the stage with water, and when the air is almost gone he preforms Red Hot Slice]); and Insane Koala (My not-so-evil clone. Looks just like me except he is green. Instead of axe he has Hypnotic Singing sword. [Singing as in it sings, it is not on fire]. TECHNIQUES: [All techniques are the same as mine except for the next one.] Song of the Singing Sword [Sword begins singing; opponent is forced to sing along with sword. Foe can not do anything while singing]. Finisher: Parade of the Annoying Zombies [Crowd of Annoying Zombies comes and begins driving foe insane with their sheer annoyingness.])No desired pairings. Name the team whatever you think applies to them.
 Reviewed By: koku [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2004 15:53 CDT
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My charecters hair color is a red color(like kuramas)with black on the tips and my eyes are green(like kuramas)
 Reviewed By: koku [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2004 12:44 CDT
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Name:Taka.Miamino Race:Dark fox/Dark angel Age:15(not sure) Appearance: 4ft 8in Fighting clothes:a black and red guy kimono Normal clothes:School Uniform...or her capris and a black ripped tank top Technique: (1)Weapon: Rose Whip Kagon-Retsuzan-Shi ( Beautiful-cutting -branch a.k.a. Whirlwind Rose Whip ) - used to cut her opponents into pieces using her rose whip. Fu-Ka-Enbu-Jin ( Blast-Flower-Waltz-Formation a.k.a. Wind-Flower-Circle-Formation ) - rose petals surrounds Taka and protects her. Whoever touches the petals will be cut. Janen-Ju ( Wicked-Thoughts-Tree a.k.a. Tree of Hallucinations ) - a demonic tree that produces hallucinations to anyone who is attached to it. It was also used to defeat toguro ani. Kyu-Ketsu-Shokubutsu ( Blood Sucker Plant ) - a demonic plant that sucks blood from Taka's opponent until the opponent dies. Miscellaneous Techs : Shimaneki - Sou ( Death - Summoning Grass ) , Shoku - You - Shokubutsu ( Demon - Eater - Plant ) , Makai No Ojigisou Personality:Dark and light (depends on how she feels) Finishing Move:self distrusction (onlt used in great battles used for destroying the opponent and badley injuring Taka. History : I am kuramas sister by blood and was trained by Toguro to destroy the yyh team Desired pairing: i would like to be paired with Touya and Toguro.Either one would be fine *I hope to be in your fic so thank you..and yeah bye*
 Title: i was cut off
Reviewed By: _Nanashi_ [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 28, 2004 21:55 CDT
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3) When a strong emotion overwhelmes me (i.e. - fear, love, etc.), my body is surrounded by a vortex that sucks the air (and thus the life) out of my enemy...this isn't exactly what you'd call a controled attack... 4) I fly in cirles fast enough I create a whirlwind that I can control. FINISHING MOVE: Only is absolutely neccessary...I become a part of the wind (i.e. - invisible, and, well, not solid) to invade my opponents body through their lungs and then my energy expands and they go BOOM! BUT, I don't like killing so... DESIRED PAIRING: Jin, Hiei, or Touya (and that's my order of preference)
 Reviewed By: _Nanashi_ [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 28, 2004 21:55 CDT
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NAME: Nanashi RACE: Wind youkai AGE: 17 APPEARANCE: I have black, boyishly cut hair (think Akane from Ranma 1/2) and green eyes. I am 5'2'' and I have a scar on my left forearm from cooking (don't ask). Also, I do NOT wear make-up. NORMAL CLOTHES: My preferred outfit is khaki shorts, a black halter top (modestly cut pervs), and black, flat-soled shoes. FIGHTING CLOTHES: White cotton capri pants, a black, Chinese style, sleeveless shirt, and black, flat-soled shoes. PERSONALITY: I'm a tomboy (if you couldn't already tell) who is stubborn, fun-loving, clumsy, and independent. I am deathly afraid of deep water, bugs, and bleachers. MY HISTORY: My mother birthed me when she was only 17 and my father abandoned us shortly after. My mother remarried and 6 years later, bore another child, a son named Kiyoshi who I love with all my heart. My mother usually ignores me and my step-dad is never around, but between Kiyoshi and flying (I'm a wind demon) I feel like the luckiest girl in the world. TECHNIQUES: 1) I mainly use a staff to attack and defend since I can't control my wind powers very well yet 2) Not really an attack but I create a dome of swirling wind over myself to block stronger attacks, but this can only be used for a short period of time since it requires a great deal of energy, especially if I expand it to include other people 3) When a strong emotion overwhelmes me (i.e. - fear, love, etc.), my body is surrounded by a vortex that sucks the air (and thus the life) out of my
 Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 02, 2004 00:40 CDT
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Did you read the Author's Note? There's a form you have to fill out and put in your review. Without it, I'm afraid that you can't be in the story. Gomen ne. ^^;
 Title: Hi!! I want to be in!! Please!!
Reviewed By: Kasemeihikotori  On: August 01, 2004 12:49 CDT
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Hey! I want to be in please! I'm Kasemei, and if I can, please email me at Kasemei@yahoo.com ok? and tell me what you need. I can be a ref, and can I be paired with Midori? I'll tell you when you email me PLEASE EMAIL!! Thanks! Kasemei
 Reviewed By: Youkos_Rose [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 18, 2004 16:37 CST
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May i please be in your fic?My charecters name is Kyoko(kee-yo-ko)and she is a spirit fox just like Yoko.She is 5'2 and has an hour glass figure.Her hair is black w/ silver highlights and reaches her calves when free but is normaly up in a high ponytail that ends at her knees.Her bangs are also silver and her ears are silver w/ black tips her five tails are the same color as her hair.She wears a outfit simalar to the one that kurama wore in the dark tournament.The outar kimono is white with red roses along the edges the sash is red silk actualy the whole outfit is silk.The cuffs and neckline are also red as are the baggy pants that can be seen through the slits that go up to her hip on each side of the kimono.She is very kind and gentle and is caring towards others even strangers.Becouse of her kind and cheerful attitude she makes friends easily but a lot of people take advantage of her as well.Most of the time she dos'nt even realize when this is happening becouse she trusts everyone.Don't get me wrong tho she can fight when she wants to!Her abilities are the same as yoko's her maine weapon is a rose whip but she is also very good with a katana and always has one with her.I dont care what team i am on i just want to fight and maybe get to hug kurama or yoko?He He i know i'm outta my mind right somone has probably already claimed him if not please i beg of you can kurama and kyoko be a couple or her be yoko's mate from back when he was in the makai or somthing!!! Oh yea great idea update soon!!!!Ja ne.
 Reviewed By: KatKat  On: March 13, 2004 21:57 CST
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Hi! I would love to be in the tournament! I'm Kat and I have four other people to be on my team. Kay, first is me Kat the white ice cat. I'm an Ice Cat Demon. I'm 5'10". I have white skin, white/silver hair, & silver/blue eyes. I also have white cat ears & tail. My hair is mid back and is brided with bangs shoulder legth. I'm carefree to put it short. I wear in the tournament a chinesse outfit. the shrit is white with silver lining and the pants are silver and the slash, that goes around the waist is ice blue. second is my little sister Kitty the black ice cat. she looks like me and is 5'8" but has black hair and golden eyes. she has black cat ears and tail. her hair is shoulder legth with no bangs. she is happy-go-lucky. She wears the same outfit but it is all black with golden lining. third is the oldest of the three triplets, Chaos, then Doom, & last is Mayhem. they all look alike, black hair, eye, and wings. they have pointy ears and wear black mini skrites and tight black shrits with black boots and gloves. Chaos is just like Hiei. Doom is short-tempared. and Mayhem is just like a child. Chaos is just like mines but no bangsand is 6'4", Doom is cut very very short and sticks out everwhere and is 6'0", & Mayhems is just pass her shoulders and is up in two pony-tails in the side of her headand 5'10". And I think that is all. And are name is Ice Desturction. Hope I didn't get you confused. Can't wait until you update. oh yea, the attacks! Here they are! Kat: Ice claws(her claws become cold and frezzes what they cut), Ice Breath(like Toyas(sp?)attack he used on Karama in the Dark Tournament), & Ice's Final Death(frezzes everything including herself & oppoent) Kitty: uses a sword a lot, Ice claws, & Ice shards(ice shards appaer around Kitty and she sends them at her oppoent) Chaos: Chaos Whip(uses a whip and cuts or wraps around an oppoant killing or inmobling them) & Chaos(she says this and the oppoent becoms confuse) Doom: Doom Bell(rings a bell and depending what she wants kills, confuses, or makes the oppoent insane) & Doom arrows(looks like she pretenting to fire an arrow and then the bow & arrow appear and she fires them) Mayhem: Mayhem Swords(uses two swords to shoot out energy) & Cute(becomes too cute for the oppoent; it depents on the oppoent personaltiy) The triplets: Desturction (shoots out energy but they become very weak after words) & they use there wepoens normaly as while (Doom has her own set of bows and arrows) Well that should be it hope you don't have trouble reading this. Update soon please. Kat the white ice kat
 Reviewed By: Zdawg [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 20, 2003 10:24 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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kool! i wanna sign up too! i don't care what team u put me on (as long as it's not THOSE other demon ppl..yeah) hehe!! UPDATE SOON!!! I like this!!
 Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune.  On: December 17, 2003 19:33 CST
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Oh! BTW people, I allready have two refs so no more ok? Unless ofcourse Jinsgirl doesn't send me her Bio in a couple of days or so I am not putting her in. Sorry, but I can't wait forever and I can't put someone in without atleast knowing what they look like.
 Reviewed By: Eleena_Kitsune.  On: December 17, 2003 19:31 CST
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O.k then, how about Team Kurayami? It means something like Dark or Twighlight I think......
 Reviewed By: Sailor Dark [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 16, 2003 21:26 CST
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I want to be the leader I can't think of the name but you pick make it sound japenese or something. She looks just like Sailor Neptune. Can you please call me Sailor Dark or SD??? Dark sounds boring and lame and old.
 Reviewed By: MercuryKnightIan  On: December 16, 2003 20:27 CST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Lonewolf. I know that name. I figured she was one of your friends. A fifth member? Sign me up! You know I love to be written into fan fics! Oh yeah, good job again, Eleena. But you already knew that.
 Title: I have a team
Reviewed By: sayome aka anienightstalker  On: December 15, 2003 21:14 CST
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Team Amos : Rokonya, Rya, Nya, Koya, Roya. They all have purple eyes. Allwear black dresses except 4 rokonya who has purple. All have combate boots. Rya is a fire/fox demon, red hair ears and tail,uses fire bombs. Nya is a plant/fox demon think girl yoko just with blond hair has a yellow rose whip. Koya is a water/fox demon with blue hair and ears and tail she uses ice shards and ice blasts. Roya is a spirit/fox with black hair and silver ears, tail, she can teloport and can turn peoples attackes agains them. Rokonya is purple hair black ears and tail. She has a dimond blade knife and can turn into anything.She is the leader and is a transforming demon. She uses strength and skill. You have my permission to use them in anything from now on. :)
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