| "Gundam Pilots Survive "SURVIVOR"" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: funny
Reviewed By: pure hope [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 15:07 CST
Comment/Review:
love your story its soooo funny lol
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Reviewed By: Alero On: May 02, 2004 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! I loved this fic! Now I'm sad that it's over! Right more. You have a way with words.
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Reviewed By: anime_otaku418 On: March 01, 2004 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww its over! oh well i cant wait to read your next one! hurry up and write it!
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Reviewed By: animeotaku418 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE THAT WAS A GOOD ONE! yay duo doesnt die! hehehe that authors note made my day! duos just to cool to die! wufies coo too! is heero acually gonna catch somthin this time?!? if he does i will jump off a cliff in shock.............or not............ any way, keep up the good work! ps thatnks for the little warning! ARIEL
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Reviewed By: ao On: February 04, 2004 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay a new chapter but dont let duo be dead or i will shove peanut butter up ur nose!!!!!.........not really but ppppppppppppppplllllllllleaeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssseeeeeee let him live!!!! (update soon!) -ARIEL- PS i like heeros poem!
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Title: Gundam Pilots survive "SURVIVOR"
Reviewed By: Sailor Wind On: January 26, 2004 05:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was terrific! The only thing I didn't like was how short it was. And you could of used more Sailor Senshi and make it better and just wondering but where is the romance there?!? Other wise it was hillarious!! I totally looovvvved readin' this story. And I have kinda' agree that you should be a little nicer to Duo.
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Reviewed By: ao On: January 14, 2004 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo its ariel again. i LOVE this fic but.....DONT BE MEAN TO DUO!!!-_-+ --ahem....anywho keep writing k? i look forward to ur next fic!! -ARIEL-
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Reviewed By: ao On: January 09, 2004 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE IM DYING WITH LAUGHTER!!! U MUST RIGHT MORE!!!!!!!!!! DUO ROCKS!!!!! *dies from laughter* ........
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Reviewed By: Shi_no_hime*not signed in On: January 05, 2004 23:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Shi_no_Hime has returned ...though you know partiallywhat i'm thinking at this moment *smirks* I will say nothing cept' for you to continue *grins* i'm off to continue updating ...*snickers*
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Reviewed By: infernale On: December 22, 2003 07:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, your story is fun! you can make a lot out of the idea of 5 pilots on an island.... btw its "alzheimer". the illness. :-)
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Reviewed By: liza On: December 20, 2003 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so funny!!!!!!!!! please update soon!!!!! when is sailor moon coming in?
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Reviewed By: Sky87 On: December 20, 2003 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is kind of interesting little dull at some points, but it is coming along. I think sometimes you don't follow the characters personality at times, and I think that messes with your story sometimes. Also when you talk in Japenese you should explain what it means in English. Not knowing any Japenese I got confused at some parts. A pretty good story so far, but I think you should do something to make it a little interesting and it might help you to watch an episode of Suvivor so you can get a better grasp on your ideas. Just an opinion, but looking foward to reading more. Sky87
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Reviewed By: Sugarfire On: December 19, 2003 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
A little OOC, but that's what makes it so funny.
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Reviewed By: a-o On: December 18, 2003 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur story is really good! plez write more!!!! yay duo rocks!!! yay!!! so does heero!! yay!!! so does everyone else!!!! YAY!!!!!!!q!!!!!!! ARIEL
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Reviewed By: Shi_no_Hime On: December 14, 2003 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude* tha's all she can say* .....
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