| "Second Chances" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Shel On: May 16, 2010 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very new to this site, usually only reading what stories are referred to here from fanfiction.net. But this story is incredibly original and fun to read! I was just wondering if you planned on updating any time soon? I would love to finish reading this story sometime and see how the characters' lives play out.
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Title: Great peace of work!
Reviewed By: Ranma-sensei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following your story a while now - and I think it's great! Problem is, I can't imagine myself doin' such harm to one of them; but that's okay, as long as you do it. :P
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 11:10 CDT
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hey, this is really good!, i keep trying to follow it in the maqnga as i read it! lol, that was close though with nabiki... i hope ranma doesn't fall for her, shes a hustler and a minor pimp... lol
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Reviewed By: chains [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fanfic! I really cannot wait for more! Its exceedingly interesting and fun to read.. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for an update...
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Reviewed By: Wingman0 On: April 16, 2007 21:35 CDT
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OMG! An...an...AN UPDATE!!!!! WOOT!!! Now i'm going to have to go back and read the story all over agian. But I have to say I was wishing you would finish this story. Hope you keep updating.
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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GREAT FIC!!! you haven't update this fic for a lonf time!!! if u had discontinued , please say!!!
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Reviewed By: Janneia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love this fic! *adds to favourites* I especially love the AMG additions (I was expecting Nanban Mirror or something ;P) And I'm really glad this fic is on life support (as long as it's not dead) - there are so many fics out there that aren't completed with such good plots... *sigh* Life is busy but as long as it isn't completely dead... there's still hope right? *thinks back to her incomplete fics on another site* xD I also like your Akane. So many fics portray her as a 'mallet-wielding uncute _psycho_ terminally angry' girl who whacks Ranma into LEO at the drop of a hat (or less) and only that, with no depth of character at all. I'm no KOTF (Knight of the True Fiancee or whatever the acronym is) but I like how you're being "true" with this Akane like taking all factors of her personality into account and things like that (as opposed to making her this completely angelic thing the second time around with Ranma). ...I don't really write reviews so I'm not sure how helpful this is to you but keep the excellent/superb/similar synonyms WORK! I also like the Nabiki/Ryouga (hopefully soon to come?) subplot and I'd like to see this part continued? ;P Um yeah, I think that's all I have to say. *waits patiently for Chapter 24*
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Title: Second Chances
Reviewed By: Nihaoranma [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC!! The newest chappie was awesome!!!! Please don't leave this fic where it is! *sniff* T_T
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Reviewed By: Spirit Nova On: September 04, 2004 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. Love the plot you've sovled two girl problems. I think now what what will they have to deal with for shampoo and the old-croone. What of the evil old PERVET. Please keep the story going.
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Title: Mwee!
Reviewed By: Natsumi Chan (Can't be bothered to log in soz @_@) On: April 14, 2004 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read through the first couple of chaps, stopping here then continueing tomoz. Firstly let me say THANKYOU, this is the kind of fic I've been looking for, something written well with a really captivating plot. ^^ It's great so far, I'm loving your writing style. Continue writing! ^__________^''
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2003 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do like all your Ranma Stories and I truly hope you continue your Stories and update your site soon.
dennisud |
Reviewed By: Adyen On: July 10, 2003 02:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I left a similar review somewhere else, but you just GOT to update this, or even if you put it on your website! I've been waiting for the next chapter since... a very long time! |
Reviewed By: Prae On: June 04, 2003 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You MUST continue this story!!!
It's fun, believable, and I'm really curiouse as to what happens next!!
How come it's been so long since you last updated? |
Reviewed By: Akuma-sama On: November 27, 2002 12:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did i give it a perfect rating? That's because it IS perfect!! Sucks that you won't update 'till 2003 though, i want to know what happens next ^_- |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: November 15, 2002 08:01 CST
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I think you should update chapter 23 very soon. I has been a long time since you wrote this. |
