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| "La casa de los muertos" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: flamesinger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 09:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is really good so far. The only thing that would make it better, besides getting someone to beta, would be to UPDATE! I've read the entire fic so far several times and I'm dying to know what happens next. So please, PLEASE UPDATE! I'm just DYING to know what happens with Seto and Jou. Not to mention Bakura and Ryou... hehehehe... *cough* Um yes... You get the point. It's wonderful, but it needs an update. Besides that, keep on writing and have fun doing it!
| Reviewed By: Chibi Kitsune On: December 22, 2003 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The idea of using a typical horror movie, I thought, was quite good. The writing could be layed out better, using paragraphs, and the spelling has room for improvement. I also noticed that your punctuation could be better. That aside: I think the idea of the fanfic, the use of characters and the descriptions were all quite well done and I hope you continue with this, as I would like to hear what happens next.
| Reviewed By: JD On: December 18, 2003 11:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have you heard of a spell checker?
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