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| "My Guardian of Bloody eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going with this story, it is a good story and should keep going. Update soon.
| Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good, keep it up.
| Title: Great fic!
Reviewed By: The Great Super Saiyan 5 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Id, Shinji's adoptive father? Scary! Anyway, I think you should try to do lemons when you feel like it unless the readers say (by majority) that they suck. I'm also curious as to whether this story will feature Fei in any way besides his alter ego, and I'm hoping you'll put Citan in. Citan rules! Not as much as Id, of course, but... Anyway, another person I'd like to see would be Grahf (forget his Wiseman persona), but I'll leave the characters up to you. I'm a Shinji/Asuka fan, so if the pairing's still open and this helps you decide, that's my vote. I tend to go out of my way to read Shinji/Asuka lemons, to tell the truth. Id needs to come in and beat the shit out of an Angel on his own! I also think you should feature some Gears. Later, and thanks for listening to my rambling!
| Title: This is Great!
Reviewed By: Grey Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great so far, I like the idea of this fic so far. You say you're the impartial type, ever considered Shinji/Misato?
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