| "Lost Identity" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Kirei (not logged in) On: October 23, 2004 08:39 CDT
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It was hard to read with all the stuff between the sentences.
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Reviewed By: Izumi On: August 17, 2004 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice ending.... luv it very much!!
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Reviewed By: Iris (Iris_Halanta@hotmail.com) On: June 06, 2004 12:20 CDT
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psst! it's me again... I forgot something: I CANNOT believe you only have 6 reviews X_X!! You deserve like double of the reviews I got for my story. (Your fic was much better! ^^ well mine wasn't YGO anyway...) I tend to ramble a lot. Forgive me XD
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Reviewed By: Iris (Iris_Halanta@hotmail.com) On: June 06, 2004 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Hi! Um, I'm Iris and I've only just started to like Yu-Gi-Oh, I'm really fond of Yami and Kaiba, so I was desperately looking for fanfics with that pairing, but I stumbled upon your fic and decided to give it a go. When I noticed Kaiba had a big role, I was addicted, I read this whole afternoon! I think the way you've "made" him, is really good. Not exactly as in the series, not OOC, but *just* right! (Not that I really know if its really good or not... I've only seen 5 episodes on tv yet *blush*) And I loved the fact that they were friends. I liked the whole plot. Even your comments ^_~ Oh, you mentioned somewhere that those comments above and under the chapter arn't allowed anymore on FF.net?! That's really stupid! I always placed notes... but it has been a while since I last visited that site and actually worked on my fanfic... (now I'm rambling, sorry.) I enjoyed myself very well reading this. I only found it a bit strange what happened after that chapter with the tape, when Yugi and the others left. After that it got a bit odd, but when I eventually finished the other chapters I thought it was okay. It was a good ending. I don't know if you do shounen-ai, since also you made Yugi go "HENTAI!!!" towards Kaiba somewhere in the fic, but I hope so I'd love to read more fics written by you. So that's what I'm going to check out now. Good luck on future fics, if you write more [I'm sure of that ^_~] I think you're a cool person [I can tell what kind of personality someone has by paying attention to the author's notes... O.o yes really] Domo arigatou gozaimasu! ~ Iris ~ PS. don't think I'm some kind of obsessed, strange stalking fan O_O!! Please! I'm just excited about this! ^^;; really. Some people ignore me when I'm like this x_x ... sumimasen.
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Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 18:09 CDT
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I can't believe you only have 5 reviews! People are so mean! I loved it and I'm still loving it! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl On: February 09, 2004 16:13 CST
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This is truly a wonderful fic! Very well written!
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Title: Lost Identity
Reviewed By: Kirei Chikara (Patricia Theodorou) On: January 05, 2004 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved it! It made me laugh and cry and it also made me feel as if I were apart of the story. I see that my friend Rikoh has rated this story and I think I can speak for both of us when I say it was one of the most creative stories we have ever read. Please continue the story before I drive myself to insanity and before my Yami takes over and decides to destroy the world because of the suspese you have given us. (Ask Rikoh, she knows that I am prone to do this from past experiences.) I have read the story over and over countless times and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please hurry I feel that I am losing contol over my Yami... Yami:Continue or be prepared to be banished to the Shadow Realm!!!! Mwhahahahahaha
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Reviewed By: Rikoh Weinstein On: December 29, 2003 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here comes the constructional criticism. Ok, some lines are so confusing it throws off my reading. Do you have an editor? But overall, I loved it! Please post the continuations! Even my Yami wants you to continue (and she never reads)!
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Reviewed By: Kyoko Izumi On: December 29, 2003 07:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You deserved some encouragement... no? My hikari... regardless of what you said.... go on update this fic until the most recent!!! And I'm not fooling you since I'm your Yami!!! ;P
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Reviewed By: yugioh fanatic On: December 27, 2003 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Its sooooooooo funny. please write more. i want to see the ending. i ve been sitting here just reading and reading and reading...
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