| "Rapture" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: RedRose On: August 07, 2004 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ I see absolutely nothing bad about your fic. Grammar's great, I like how you graphed the events, and I DO hope Tatsuha's in it. What about Ryuuchi? Ne, please add Tatsuha/Ryuuchi! Kawaii no Ryu-chan! ^o^ Yea, it would be interesting to have someone wearing pie ^^;; wouldn't Shuichi like to lick it off ^-~
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Reviewed By: Dibbity On: December 24, 2003 11:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good beginning. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Cool so we'll get "fruits" in the future? Heh hee he... Aliens eh? Like the e.t. kind? Will you be explaining more about Shu's race in the chapters to come? I am asking alot of questions aren't I? I'm like a Shu in woman form or something...
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