| "Existence" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Title: SUPERB!
Reviewed By: ^__^ On: August 15, 2004 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holly shit this is a great story! I was tearing by the end of the chaper titled something about Nips [don't remember the name...bad memory] Keep writing. Deffinitly the best I've read thus far. The plot is so creative and enjoyable ^__^. Your writig style is also VERY good. **tears** I must commend you on a job well done ::claps:: [didn't/couldn't comment on your spelling or grammer because i can't spell for beans nor is my grammer very good >_
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Title: Oh My GOD!
Reviewed By: Black-Eyed Susan On: May 01, 2004 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the way you used 'Open Your Heart' from .hack//Sign.It's one of my favorite animes and that's one of my top 5 favorite songs.Overall it's a really good story,really an OG,(Original Gangster).Keep writing!I want to read that lemon!
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 16:36 CST
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gAh! hella goood!! now, about the next chapter... can we please talk about sex?! yep, you guessed it, i'm Miroku's BEST friend. lol, perverted me, i need to get a life. ~_~ buh great story!! continue! and whoever reads this and doesnt put up a review is inconciderate. GREA JOB! heh, better than my stories... ~_~ ::sob sob::
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Title: Excited Sesshoumaru!
Reviewed By: SoulHunterJa9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 15:06 CST
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LMAO!!! Oh that Sesshoumaru. Why does he keep saying he's gonna leave but ends up not leaving? Sorry I haven't reviewed earlier, I've been really lazy ^^;; I really like your story so far! I like all the flashbacks and stuff too.
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Reviewed By: inuwingsofwhite [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its just getting better and better
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sorry I am lazy and I don't review *tear* I really like all the updates you have done since I started reading.. ^_^ It's coming along really nicely.. Keep up the great work.. Subnote: I think Sesshomaru has something evil up his sleeve... he is kind of fickle when it comes to whether he likes Akane or not... Inuyasha's and Sessy's daddy must have had an attitude cause they both have it... hehe ^_^ I am blabbing, I'll shut up... but great fic!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: February 18, 2004 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating at last, by the way, i wonder how this story will turn out.. i'm interested.
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Reviewed By: inuwingsofwhite [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it vary creative, good character development
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Reviewed By: Relix On: January 12, 2004 03:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating! I mean it!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: January 06, 2004 06:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with "tk", if people don't want to review good stories like this then they are idiots, continue writing, i'll review if no one else will!
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Reviewed By: tk On: December 23, 2003 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is cool , i would love you to continue on no matter how many reviews you get.
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Reviewed By: Gothic Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is really different, but I like it. I can't wait to read more and see what happens next, so please update soon k?
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Reviewed By: Ishtaral On: December 22, 2003 11:09 CST
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Wonderful story, can't wait to see what you write next :)
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Reviewed By: lilsweteeangel On: December 21, 2003 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tihs rox plz update =D
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Reviewed By: a kOol fan On: December 21, 2003 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is sooooo kOol plz update!!!!!!
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