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Reviewed By: angel_vamp2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 05:44 CST
Comment/Review:
I really liked your story... and I would really like it if you added more Lantis and Hikaru... not to sound mean.. or anything... neway... i really like the whole idea about playing the game... nad how you sent L/H to his room.... Ican't wait for the next chapters... but I understand about the whole Homework problem.... so take your time... but pleze get at least the next chapter up...
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Reviewed By: hobbit On: January 14, 2004 15:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ireally liked this fanfic b-cuz it was unique but the only thing i didn't like was the fact that u didn't do many fuu and ferio scenes. neway, i'm dying to read more so please write the next chapter already!
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Reviewed By: ko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 13:30 CST
Comment/Review:
hey i like it so far i wound like you to white the next chapter please
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