Reviewed By: Narusegawa Megumi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 10:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a cute fic. I thought it was very well written for English not being your native language. There were bound to be a few gramatical mistakes, but none were all that bad and fairly easy to ignore. You may want to enlist a BETA reader to help you correct your mistakes, preferably one who also speaks your native langauge, but any BETA would be better tahn none. (And if you're looking for one who's also fairly fluent in Spanish, I can help! But really I'd love to BETA for you even if you speak some other language ^_^) Oh, a BETA reader is kind of like an editor who changes as gramatical mistakes or spelling errors. I like your idea for the fic a lot. It was very original. ^__^ ~Narusegawa Megumi
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