Reviewed By: Aestrin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 00:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really like this story so far. it's different than ones i've read before, and i think it's cool that you're kind of going out on a limb by doing something so unique. please continue. one thing though- your chapter 3 is the same as chapter 2. just thought you should know.
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