| "Yearning" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Devona
Reviewed By: Devona Wolfe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 16:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Geez, only one chapter? I didn't notice that before I started reading... PLEASE UPDATE!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: fire of phoenix On: December 26, 2003 05:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! You're not going to leave me hanging like this, are you? I wanna know what happens next. Keep it up you're doing well!
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Reviewed By: Macarena On: December 24, 2003 16:14 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this so far (especially since it has art in it) :D Great Job and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Akennea On: December 22, 2003 10:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep writing!!!!!!!!!
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