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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: Lily Tsukino On: July 24, 2004 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO ME!!!! WRITE MORE DANGIT!!!! lolx. Hey! I did read your profile so I have found you! And you better write more or else....hahah I love this story. Please write more!! Or I shall die! Well mentally of bordem and not knowing what happens.
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Reviewed By: DarkAnimeChick [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 20:02 CST
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i was a bit confused of chapter 6... but... ok... so this girl (sorri forgot her name) is lyke his past lub or sum thing? *sigh* so confused... *sigh* dat ish so sad... (dat im confused)
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Reviewed By: mental On: February 12, 2004 19:14 CST
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Hello' I just read your fanfic and I thought you were wrong, it is funny.I just read chapters 1-6 in about an hour (don't ask me why and how)and I didn't understand chapter 6 after Karou went into the library.Please make more sence next chapter.I also read the part about you cousin and I'm sory for your loss, but I hope you get over it eventualy get over it (that is if you already haven't sory I suck at reading)and go on with life like I did.Now please excuse me I'm about to kill my doctor for putting me back on a steroid treatment and conice him that I'm thirteen years old and I don't need a bed time story, again I'm very sory about your loss and write another chapter as soon as yoou can.
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Reviewed By: DarkAnimeChick [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 00:16 CST
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is Yahiko a friend who is da same age as kaoru or younger lyke in rurouni kenshin?
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Title: I know what I love!
Reviewed By: Askukay [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 07:27 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love monkeys....erm I mean I love your story write more please!
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Title: A-HA! [got your email as well]
Reviewed By: Battousais gal[not logged on] On: January 02, 2004 11:32 CST
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Anyhow...... yeah, KEEP ON GOING ZERIANYU-SAN!!! WAI! Hopefully I can get my butt moving on my own fanfics.......... maybe... Great chapter! So Kenshin is a new guy in their school huh? Naughty images..... I really should have known that Megumi was only looking at his ankle...... bad Tanya.... ^^ Tanya-- wishing you a Happy New Year!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: YoukoKurama201(won't let me sign in) On: January 01, 2004 22:49 CST
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That was FUNNY! Man, Kaoru is set on having her way, isn't she? UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Last Knight On: December 23, 2003 12:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story. It may just be me, but i like characters that are naive or humble, likethe kid when he tried to walk away after saving her or her after getting almost ran over worried about school.
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Title: Darn cliffhangers! [Even though we all know who he is]
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 12:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARHHH!!!! What is going to happen next? UPDATE, UPDATE , UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAI! I'm your first reviewer!!!! Happiness!!! Update soon, okay? Tanya-- wishing you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year
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