| "Sweet Revenge may not be as sweet." Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: lilyyasha On: November 02, 2009 02:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, its not a bad fic. However, the spelling and grammar is a problem - perhaps a Beta can help you out? Kagome is really, really OOC as well. While she does put up with a lot from IY, she is not that low on self esteem that she would sleep around. This has the potential to be a good fan-fic. Keep at it.
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Reviewed By: TalNae On: December 28, 2006 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have yet to finish reading the story, but the beginning is quite strange and rather abrupt. I like your idea though for the story. I know a lot of authors use author notes inside the story, but I find that it disrupts the flow. I really do like the story line however and look forward to reading later chapters.
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Title: Sweet Revenge May Not Be As Sweet.
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Sweet Revenge May Not Be As Sweet.
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 16:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: revenage
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! do u mean that inu-yasha 'accidently' marked kagome as well??
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Reviewed By: Reviewing_ you_2005 On: August 30, 2005 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I suggest you get a Beta. Also, while your at it, make the story more interesting.
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Title: Chapter 6(5)
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Can't wait to read what Inuyasha does and what goes on between Hiei/Kagome/Kurama.
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Title: Sweet Revenge May Not Be As Sweet.
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 13:53 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Sweet Revenge May Not Be As Sweet.
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 14:05 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: November 18, 2004 19:10 CST
Comment/Review:
what happened? update soon!
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Title: Sweet Revenge may not be as sweet.
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 18, 2004 19:03 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Sweet Revenge may not be as sweet
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 01, 2004 20:06 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: chapter 5
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome update. Update again soon. Can't wait to see Inuyasha's reaction to Kagome being mated to both Hiei and Kurama.
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Reviewed By: AnimeAngel20 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update soon..cant wait to read the rest of it..!!
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 09:59 CDT
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you had to end it there didn't ya? pllllleaaaaazzzzzz update soon it was getting good and i can't wait to know whats going to happen next. so UPDATE. Ja Ne
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