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| "The Way Things Go" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Christmas Love
Reviewed By: treaammo On: October 14, 2007 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this one was really touching. I've never been a huge Takato/Juri fan, so the overly dramatic discussion about previous relationship troubles between the two of them was uncomfortable to read. Takato and Jen are a much better pair, and the tension Takato experiences about letting jen know what it is he is feeling is so like real life its a joy to read through. If only life had such happy endings, eh?
| Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nani? No reviews? How can this be? What a tragedy has struck! (or maybe I'm just a little in the dark at the moment because this computer needs counseling...). I am surprised, for this is an amaizing piece of work. I read it a few months ago, but lost the link so I never commented. But a story this good just nagged at me until I finally found the link once more! But enough about that, reviews are for the writer to know what their story has going for it and what needs improvement. I don't recall any big problems with the story, I was too overly esctatic about your style of writing. It looks simple witht his format, and it may or may not be (I don't recall so brightly and as I am a "briliant *laced with sacasm* reader I have not managed to skim a read before reviewing. But I can tell you that I loved it (...). While reading it I wasn't sure if I should cry, laugh, or skip to the last page because you drew out the suspence so well. I was hooked till the end! While I'm here, Might I just say the same about one of your other fics, It's the Thought that Counts for it was just as spiffy. are you now, or do you consider ever going pro with this writing tallent?
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