| "Kanzen Chinmoku 'Perfect Silence'" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 10:33 CST
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coolie ive been folowin yor story for a while i almost thout u forgot about it but glad u updated it and i never knew a 'human' can make sessy so mad weres the mask wen u need it right well hopin for more updates soon cya
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko (STILL not signed in) On: January 17, 2004 18:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Oops, gomen, didn't see Relix there.. He's reviewed my fic too.. Doumo, Relix-san!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: January 17, 2004 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Originality at it's peak, exellent work allthough there were a LOT of name and spelling errors but still, this is interesting, update again soon!
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Title: Hmm...
Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 09:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well.. for a first fanfic, it's good. but you might wanna get s/o to read over it before you post it. And it's Shippou, not Shipou And for future mistakes in Japanese: Inuyasha not some other evil variant Kouga not some other evil variant Kirara not some other evil variant Sankon Tessou not Iron reaver soul stealer or whatever Hijin Kessou not Blades of Blood Tessaiga/Tetsusaiga not some other evil variant Toukijin not some other evil variant SESSOUMARU HAS NO POISONOUS WHIP ATTACK!!!!!!!!!! Just thought you should know. Oh yea, it's Myouga, not some other evil variant. When you get new chappies up, I'll tell you if you have any mistakes with the names/anything else Japanese. Jaa na!
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