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Reviewed By: Trey of the Dead [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a very big anime fan and I am very familiar with Sagara and the Sekihoutai. With that said I must say this was a very well written piece, especially considering that it was your first. The brother/sister chemistry between Sagara and Reika worked very well and the overall tone of the story was perfect. Any piece that expresses emotions as you did in this one would easily gain my praise, but this one also contained so much more. You have talent my friend. =)
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Title: Random Passer-by
Reviewed By: ~^~-'- On: July 08, 2005 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heartwarming and heartbreaking at the same time. It was beautifully written, the emotions well expressed.
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Title: His Last Night
Reviewed By: Satori1 On: November 11, 2004 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fanfic. Kudos to the author and her creative imagination. It left me guessing and wishing there was more.
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Title: Its sad yet good^^
Reviewed By: Kino On: October 17, 2004 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww.... ITS SO SAD!!! i usually like stories that make me cry or almost make me cry. yep... it was sad alright...;_; It was still good! better than most of the stuff i write honestly..^^
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Title: hi anna
Reviewed By: dlo On: September 06, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
good imagery and emotional factoring. loved the ending-dana.
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Reviewed By: UndeadHappyRamenBoy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg... that was so sad. i didnt know he had a sister too. i think i'm gonna cry. *sniffsniff* that was really good, but so sad at the same time. keep the good work up.
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Reviewed By: DirtyOleMan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good! Your style of writing is excellant. I've read some of your other works and they're good too, but this one stands out more than others, along with 'Snow' IMO. I think you have great potential as a writer, and you should continue to put that to use. Keep up the great work, and count me as one of your regular readers now. I wish you further success.
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: kasumi the vampire queen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so sweet and beutiful. it was really sad but a great idea.
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Title: (o'.')b
Reviewed By: Gaksplat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good. Sad, but good.
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Title: I'm speechless
Reviewed By: Yarisha_Mikamora On: May 23, 2004 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was so wonderful and so much sorrow. I actually cried. (FYI I'm a fan of Captain Souzou Sagara ^^x) You have done such a great job. Keep writing. *Still crying* I respect you deeply.
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Kchan88 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an absoulutely amazing fanfic!!! I am speechless. Excellent job of prtraying Souzou as always.
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Title: Not bad
Reviewed By: Nalfein On: April 16, 2004 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a pretty good fic. I do like the OC, well done on that part.
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: Senko On: April 14, 2004 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so beautiful. You're a great writer. I'm abotu to cry and almost did while reading it. And it takes so much for me to cry sine I haven't cried for about three years. And hte last one was a fanfiction like this one. You portrayed Souzou so well and you barely ever see him in the anime. I'm really glad I got to read your story and I gave it a perfect score.
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Title: ..wow..
Reviewed By: RedSnow7607 On: March 28, 2004 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you a perfect score like last time. The ending was so sad, but very beautiful. I rated your "Snow" and begged you to write an ending, but you have already done that so nevermind. I and my friend, Sarah are amazed at your work. Great job. PS. We looked over some of your lyrics and think those are also very well-done. Good luck if you decide to do anything, (like write a novel, or write/sing any songs.) your work is amazing.
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Reviewed By: MetalKeiya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 11:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It... was... beautiful... Such sorrow... such delight... You are indeed a good writer!
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