| "Sod's Survival house (OF HELL!)" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Title: Rin\'s fan!
Reviewed By: YukinoUsagi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was sooooo funny! I love how each of the characters reacts. Don\'t take out rin though, too many fics have her as like the first person out. I would love to see her and Shippou get together ^.~I hope you update soon!
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Title: Tahk you dude!
Reviewed By: Sniper-of-Death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 16:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I'll use the idea as soon as I can but I might do the trying to sneak in on Saturday, because that every Saturday is a free day.
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Title: SLOW!
Reviewed By: Sniper-of-Death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 16:26 CST
Comment/Review:
I would like to say that my fics will be slow due to school...I'm sorry about that but I'll do what I can. If you review I'll do it in the middle of the night.
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Reviewed By: dudewholikesInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 01:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Well I would have said take Rin out but I love Lord of the rings(and the Sango taking off her bikini thing was funny). So vote off Kikyo because I hate her and I hate how everyone has to add her to their Inuyasha stories (not this story, just ones that really shouldnt have her in it). THANKS FOR USING MY IDEA! Here is another crazy idea I had. What if you have, before you vote someone off, a chapter that is all a game like Capture the Flag except both teams guard something in a fort. And they shoot cannons at people trying to get into their fort. While you hide in the middle shooting at both teams with a huge sniper rifle. At one part of it sess....seyss...sesssss....uhhh i dont know how to spell his name but you know who gets, a cannon shot at him, it misses but dirt flies up from the spot it hits and it gets in his hair and on his clothes. You say the winning team will get something great that they would all like but at the end you say that the prize is the winning team gets to take you out to dinner and buy you a new rifle. So they all get mad and start to attack you then you say that you will make their team spend another week outside if they keep trying to attack you. and if they do someone comes in and knocks them out then on the next chapter they could all be trying to sneak back into the house.
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Reviewed By: dudewholikesInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! I think you should take Rin out because she doesnt really do anything (except read LOTR) at least not yet. What if you make Shippo wonder what they are doing at night (like when he woke up and they were playing strip poker) so he knocks out Sango and turns into her (but without the tail so they all think that its her) that could be.....interesting, what would Miroku do?
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Title: its a frickin review!
Reviewed By: chickenlover2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 00:42 CST
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u should put jaken in so fluffy can stop having his vacation and then u should have a little mishap happen with miroku... like imagine that jaken somehow looks like a beautiful woman cause of a costume and miroku asks jaken to bear his child and jaken is so happy that someone loves him that he says yes except when they go 2 do their thing in bathroom 2.. miroku finds out and.... i dont know, ur supposed 2 be the creative on (mumbles something about people always taking thier ideas... and butt monkeys from hell...^-^)
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Reviewed By: Mistriss [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 16:49 CST
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this is the bset fic i have ever read! plz update it! i luv it ! ( I think that kikyo should go) ( stupid clay (4 lack of a better word) POT!) plz update soon
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