| "Sod's Survival house (OF HELL!)" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Title: o.O...
Reviewed By: mental, but to damn lazy to log in. On: June 02, 2004 18:39 CDT
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o.O...Riiiiiiiiight.I got no idea what this chapter was about, but I loved it.Can ya wait for a minute?Arigato.*Comes back 5 minutes latter after eating a billion pounds of sugar*I'LL NEVER RELAEASE MIROKU OR SANGO FROM MY CLOSET IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!Damn to much sugar.Oh well please update soon.'m bored are you?Will you be my friend?Inuyasha and Sesshy are my cousins.Can I sniff you?Can I sniff Inu-kun?I'm still bored.I should go to bored.com latter.I miss my master(Hi Master!).I wish I had money.I love your fic.Should I release Miroku and Sango?I'm gonna kill Kikyo*Takes out ramdon chainsaw* MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I gotta go and hide my doctor's dead body.I FINALY KILLED THAT FAT BASTARD MWAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!Gotta go bye bye (^_^).Please update soon or I'll join the angry mob MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!.Bye bye ^^.
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Reviewed By: Ste9mas On: May 28, 2004 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOOOOVVEEEE the story, work on your spelling.
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Reviewed By: Eko-chan On: May 01, 2004 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fic alot because I always roar with laughter while reading it but the I also believe it is a bit too much loaded with randomness and that confuses me on what'ws going on in the story. Also I have never seen Ranma 1/2 but I have heard of it and its concept but when you put those characters into your story I have almost no idea what's going on. I'm not saying to delete Ranma or anything just standing up for other confused viewers like me. But I would like to suggest that you add Kenshin characters ( If you know who they are of course) and also some more hentai moments between the Inu-Kouga-Kag triangle to increase comedy. I as a wwriter myself know its hard to come up with things without the reviewers help but some people can't review because their computer are too crappy and old! ( no offesnse to you just my computer) so I would like to add a suggestion: Sango starts to along with Houshi attempts at courting her just before they * get together* (wink-wink) someone interrupts and Miroku goes into colorful hysterics. I do hope you keep writing and updating. *Smiles* Eko-chan ^__^
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Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed On: April 29, 2004 17:41 CDT
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i love how you addid hitler,sudam(is that spelled right?) its a great story but Sango & Kagome shouldnt figt so much. shippos too cute tobe hated. cool how you add ranma in their. just an idae but you shoul make one of the Hell Tasks confinedment with pervet letchers(Miroku and Haposi) JaNe
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Title: wtf?
Reviewed By: Sniper-of-Death [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 09:25 CDT
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i WROTE THE voting conquences thing, but I screwed up, lol.
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Reviewed By: VOTING CONSEQUENCES [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 09:23 CDT
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Hey, this is what happens for each vote. O 1st 1, they all scream and try to kill me. O 2nd 1, it's the 1 week punishment all over again. O 3rd 1, Shippo makes me(Sod) live in the house:( O 4th 1, all hell breaks loose....
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Reviewed By: Purple Jello On: April 28, 2004 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oo kewl story, I like it, its funny and really interesting, hehe, The Great Mall(mentioned in chap. 1 or 2)? I know where that place is!! hehe well i like your story
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Reviewed By: Twinkie,King Of Canada On: April 27, 2004 23:18 CDT
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THE KING DEMANDS THAT SHIPPO IS IN CHARGE UNDER THE KING'S SUPERVISION.THE KING ALSO DEMANDS TO KNOW WHEN KOUGA AND NARAKU ARE EXPECTING THIER THIRD CHILD.THE KING ALSO DEMANDS THAT A SCENE WITH KIKYO FEELING UP JAKEN BE INCLUDED.AND THE KING'S LAST DEMAND IS THAT HE WISHES TO SEE THE CAST SING THE CANADIAN/TWINKIE-AN NATIONAL SONG AND SPEAK IN THE CANADIAN DIALECT FOR A DAY OR SO.AND ALWAYS REMEMBER THAT THE KING HAS ALL THE POWER IN CANADA. BROUGHT TO YOU BY THE KING'S LOVING INFORMANT, SPAZZCHICKEN. SIGNED BY THE KING, Twinkie,King Of Canada
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Reviewed By: mental [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 20:53 CDT
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YAY YOU FINALY UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!1I love your fic I thought I was gonna die 'cuz you didn't update!I think everyone shoulad stay outside for 3 days with the weather machine 'cuz well it's evil MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Damn to much sugar oh well please update soon or I'll kill Inuyasha!I know you don't care, but I haven't killed in 12 hours I'm goin through withrawal!I need blood I must kill somethin!I know I'll kill your teachers just tell me where you live and I'll murder them.I realy liked this chapter please read more of what's in Inuyasha's diary please I'll read forever.I'll also review.I gotta go I can't belive that fat bastard rus so freakin fast oh well bye bye (^_^).
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Reviewed By: dudewholikesInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 20:14 CDT
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HAHAHAHAHAH My friend also loves that game he play it all the time on gamespy. I got addicted to playing Splinter Cell 2 on Xbox Live that is why I havent been writing for over a week. I just rented it though and had to bring it back a few days ago :(. So I am going to start writing again.
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Title: AHHHH I GIVE IN YOU ANGRY MOB!
Reviewed By: Sniper-of-Death [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 20:08 CDT
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Ok, I didn't update becuz I got addicted to BF1942, then BFV, but the good news is I'll start typing sometime by May 2nd, so plz, plz, plz leave me alone!
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Reviewed By: dudewholikesInuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 03:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Sniper, this is still a very good story! I haven't been able to read it for a while. My computer messed up and I had to get it fixed that took about 3 weeks (Not getting it fixed just for us to take it in), then I started an Xbox Live clan, now i'm writing at fanfiction.net. Pen name there is Kennan I was to lazy to make anything else up so I just put my real name. Keep up the good work. So what if your grounded sneak onto the computer at around 2 am and write. Thats what I've been doing. It's about to turn 2 am right now actually.
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Reviewed By: MwAhAhAhA On: March 21, 2004 03:02 CST
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Hey man, luv your fanfic! Update as soon as you can plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz........Oh, I have one question..."Why is Shippo even TRYING to look all innocent? Everyone already knows he's faking the amnesia thing!" Oh btw, ur fanfic is funni shiz man!!
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Reviewed By: mental [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 18:48 CST
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WHAT YOUR GROUNDED WHO WOULD DO THAT TO YOU!?I will kill the people that did this to you (unles it's your parents then your on your own grown ups scare me)!Well I have to say now is write another chapter as soon as you are released from wherever your being held captive oh yeah the nuthouse I ran away from finaly found me it took them 8years to find me and I enjoyed my freedom and I was transferd to a nuthouse in Vegas 'cuz I live there.I hate this place I'm never gonna trick the lunchladies into putting dog crap in the food again.There's only one thing that I love about this place is that they took me of steroids well gotta go a riot broke out and this is my chance to escape see ya in Vegas (or Cashman depends whitch school you go to and where you live)bye bye(^_^)
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Reviewed By: Sniper-of-Death [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 20:26 CST
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I'M GROUNDED! SORRY, I'll update next week. I promise. *Angry mob make a camp and stockpile enough food for a week...*
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